You should write more like this

I've reviewed this once before under a different name but this was so erotic and hot. They were different but still very much Finchel. The connection, the acceptance, the love and the tether were very much present.
One of the other reviewers compared this with 50 Shades of Boring and I can say with all honesty that this 15,000 words was more reviting than that whole series. I couldn't get passed the first chapter I was bored out of my mind. I could even like the characters. So for that reviewr this is so much better
Honor the tether! Remember the drummer!

Holy shit that was hot. I'd be Finn's sub anyday of the week and twice on Sunday. Sexy and sweet. Loving and erotic. Brave. Well done

I loved this! I kept wishing it would just keep going on and not end! Amazing.

Loved it

Loved it!

That was one of the hottest stories I've ever read! I liked the plot as well. ;)

Wow that was an amazing story I wish it wasn't a one shot but I really liked it, it was hot N sexy

Perfection!

What a good story. And I really like the 'closing argument' of the story: In the aspect of love, Rachel would always dominate finn.. When it came to love, he would always be completely at her mercy... :-) Good job!

This was such an amazing story. Absolutely flawless from beginning to end :)

you should totally make this into a like a mulity chapter story oi ould love to read more about this finn and rachel i just love it

Okay this fanfic is so great! Congrats :)

You should do a sequal set in the future were Rachel wants marriage and children something Finn doesn't want! Test their relationship more! I love this!

fifty shades eh ? well this is very different from the original because Finn is not really Fifty Shades of fucked up and it's hard not to compare this to the novel and i must say that this is awesome .. another fantastic story .. would have been better if it's multi-chapter but real good .. hope for more stories to come and i know you'll never disappoint *clapping*