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FicAddic chapter 1 . 11/26/2015 This story was absolutely wonderful. The emotions it stirred were heartbreakingly amazing, and your writing is absolutely exquisite. It made me feel warm and fuzzy, and at the same time, so, so sad. I don't say this about many things - but this made me cry. I haven't cried reading The Fault In Our Stars or Titanic - but I was in tears after reading this. It's written very very well, and I really really wish I can write this well one day. |
RaisinContradiction chapter 1 . 7/3/2015 FIck...that's not fair. An amazing story, with a very sweet and AWESOME ending. wow. TO have a dad like gilbert then have him taken away. That's some rough stitch :/ AH well. Freddy, if it makes you feel any better, y'ell be able to live through yer dads life through his journal. And at least you got to experience the awesome that is prussia owo Good luck with Lovino and i hope yer happy. Hope yer having a wonderful day author~ |
xX-R4CH31-Xx chapter 1 . 10/26/2014 OMFG CRYING, WTH THIS IS AMAZINGLY HEART BREAKING |
madders10 chapter 1 . 8/24/2014 OH DEAR GOD, THAT HAS GOT TO BE THE SADDEST THING (And best) I ever did see... Bwah |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2014 Best story I have ever read, honestly it made me cry a lot, but reading this made me feel sad yet so happy. |
QuinnStormTwilight chapter 1 . 5/31/2014 I spent the last two hours reading this and I must admit I cried. A lot. It was freaking amazing. One of the best ever! Thank you for writing this. |
Gabrika chapter 1 . 2/22/2014 First of all, I need to say that this story is absolutely fantastic. I stopped reading about Hetalia a long time ago, but I found myself with the urge to read some prucan recently and I found this. I didn't know what to expect since almost every story ratted M is, well, lemon and PWP and stuff like that. But this story wasn't that, it was something much more deep, much more realistic (in the fictional world that happens) and much more amazing. And I would like to ask you, because I feel like I must ask, if I can translate this story to spanish so more people can read it and appreciate it and know that this amazingly fantastic fanfic exists. Thank you for writing this, it's really a one in a million thing. |
Cho-No-Iro chapter 1 . 8/27/2013 OMG! crying! :') so sweet and sad! i wish prussia didn't die... it's just so sad... |
AccountKiller10000000 chapter 1 . 8/2/2013 I LOVE YOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUU ! I read your story last night when I couldn't sleep and it made me really sad but I loved the ending, It was sweet But you made me cry. I love your writing, too. Its really hard to write down how much I love this story. Shame. But I think (even if this is years old) That you should make it into chapters. TT3TT I lOVE! |
cannoWrite chapter 1 . 7/12/2013 Whenever I saw this, I ignored it thinking that it may be, excuse me for saying this, stupid. But I finally read it and it made me cry a fountain of tears. It is nice to know that he saved everything that Freddy ever did and that he took great pride in everything he did. This just showed me not to take anything for granted and to enjoy a bit of life, even if it is short. |
The Egoist's Girlfriend chapter 1 . 6/21/2013 This is super adorable and sad and I'm just crying and my heart hurts this was a super good story |
damtoti chapter 1 . 6/8/2013 AHHH words cannot explain how amazing this story was. I think it could, and probably does, belong in chapters. Especially with the word count it has, which normally means around ten chapters. But I kind of like it better the way it is, one long story. I think oneshots are more emotional because you tend to read the whole thing through, without interruption. There are so many things I like about this. First off, I love the portrayal of Prussia's softer caring side. I feel that he does have a protective, paternal part to his personality (especially since he used to take care of Ludwig as a kid), and I love it when people intertwine that persona with his usual, crazy self. So it was kind of cute how he was so gentle and sensitive with Freddy, but still went all silly with teaching him the word "awesome." I'm a strong PruCan supporter, which is how I found the story in the first place. And usually it's hard to find pairings of the two I like, because the romance generally feels too forced and annoying. But I like how this one went by slow, developing from a friendship to romantic love. And I did sort of feel the fondness between the two even in the beginning, from the way Prussia would keep mentioning him or just happening to remember him in almost every situation. The way people do when they start to like someone. Ahh, Romano was too cute in this. As you can tell from my avatar pic, my OTP is spamano. So when I saw the subtle hints between Spain and Romano's relationship, I got kind of excited with the hope they would be a side pairing. But I like the way you went with this too. It was very unique, and kind of adorable xD It didn't feel forced either; from the first hesitant encounter between Lovi and Freddy, I would have never imagined the way it would have worked out between the two of them. From when Freddy first said he was going to marry Romano, I couldn't keep the smile off my face. I honestly love Lovi's character, and his behavior around Freddy was just SO in character. Usually I don't like OC's, but I really liked Freddy. I liked the way he developed as a hesitant, cute little baby in the beginning to an eager, active little preteen. And I don't even like kids that much, so it was amazing you managed to get me attached to the little guy. And yes, the ending was really sad. It didn't really make me that sad, as in it didn't make me walk around like a crying zombie. Honestly, I thought the middle part was more heartbreaking. Watching Prussia die, and everyone worry about him, and just knowing he wouldn't make it. Once it finally happened, I guess I felt more relieved that the uncertainty was over. And I don't know if that's good or bad; depends on how much you wanted to depress the reader. I felt like the ending tied up the entire story together very well. Also, that part with the parade. I wanted to cry. It was so bittersweet. Good job with this story. It was very well thought out, and very original. |
i-Spit-on-Fire chapter 1 . 5/29/2013 You made me cry! I am not an easy person to make cry. I feel sorry for anyone who is an easy crier and reads this. It was just so fucking beautiful! I don't know whether or not to hate you or love you. |
sits-with-cats chapter 1 . 5/4/2013 ... nothing can discribe how good this story was I...I...I...I just can't say it enough... it was so good I laughed I cried I showed about every emotion with this story I loved this story so friggin much I bookmarked it on my phone and I favorited it and followed it and I now I'm reviewing on it trying to express my love for this story but I can't and my tears are falling on my laptop as I write this I'm sorry that I can't say enough about this story it as just to amazing... I'm sorry... |
A Smiling Fire chapter 1 . 4/30/2013 You. Monster. You. Killed. Prussia. And. Now. I'm. Crying. With. Feelings. I love you and this story. Please continue to bless this world with your grace. Yours always, A Smiling Fire |