Nice and thanks for writing.

thumps up!

This is one of my favorite songs so when I saw it was in a Clois story featuring Chollie I just had to read it. Clark having to stand watch while Chloe and Ollie where in the bathroom together is great. I love the following description.

“It never ceased to amaze her just how quickly things could progress between them. Maybe it was all the years of repressed emotions. It didn't really matter the rhyme or reason for it, Lois just loved being able to lose herself in it all.”

The slow making-out session between Lois and Clark was very sexy. Aw Clark accidently burned Lois with his heat vision. :( I like that instead of getting mad at him she tried to not worry him and make him feel better. I like that she is always understanding of his powers. I also like that Clark is jealous of the man talking to Lois and uses his super strength when he shakes his hand. Clark carrying Chloe, Oliver, and then Lois home was great it matched the song perfectly. What a wonderful way to end the story, this songfic was amazing. ;)

Love, love, love it! These two couples are sooo adorable! Please more of it!

Peace out, Huntress