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U ded?

Don't worry you're doing fine making me laugh and get att attached to your characters. On a completely unrelated note, have taken it in the ass before?

So, when is your SI going to stop being such a bitch?

This cops do not pay much attention to the law and the speciesist insults seem like they be less funny if say it is racist insults. On the other hand this story is funny, action packed and sometimes thought provoking with a great buddy cop thing going on. Good job.

Maybe A another ROB is going to throw something else in the mix that is less well intention.

Man, this story is gold. I can't wait until you update again. I mean - Masses to Masses was a good buddy cop story. But yours is much more gritty and noire. I love it. Please continue ASAP. :)

...lmao ur story sucks ass and im totally gonna mock it on my tumblr

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I want Devon (that;s the name right?) back!

Can't wait for a new update... hope it is soon.

Hmmm that was entertaining

Story is turning out funny as fuck, stealing animals from a zoo? wild home wrecking parties and sniping from high places? I thought I was bad but all I seem to wake up to are traffic cones, hazard lights, street signs and one time a wheeled plastic newspaper hut stand thing, I swear if I woke up hung over on desert island I'd be wearing a traffic cone from somewhere, apparently when drunk traffic cones become the must have fashion accessory.

I noticed in some parts the story is coming off a little gay now and again, is it just bromance or ninja slash?

This story is amazing. It is so well written and great to read. I just can't understand why it hasn't recieved greater attention.

Well, if you're concerned about update rates, don't leave us on cliffies man!

Hangover-esque chapter opening? Great.

Hilarious dialogue between coworkers (my opinion, at least)? Awesome.

Weird, racist human with odd accent calling turians forkheads? Best character in history.

Your world (Bioware's world, actually) feels lived in and oddly real, even with improbable (impossible?) situations and hammy characters. You're a great writer who produces quality stuff, man. Don't let anyone tell you different.

Wow, that must have been a hell of a party. What in the hell were the elcor and volus doing? What would an elcor and volus look like having sex?

Gah, I'm not going to overthink it.

Anyways, story's still going strong. And if it wouldn't be too much of a hassle, could you take a look at one of my stories? It's a Mass Effect SI called 'Lost Effect'. It's at nearly 35k words now. There's a bit at the end of chaper 8 that was inspired by a moment in this fic. If you don't have the time to read it I understand, but I would greatly appreciate some input from a fellow author.

I'm looking forward to the next update, but don't rush it! Your stuff is good quality, I wouldn't want you to burn out.

Awesome story! Keep it up.