Reviews for In the Dark Of Day- Part 1
marlen19mana chapter 23 . 9/24
Omg best news ever ¡ so happy you are continuing this story ! Hands down one of the best fan fictions with great writing! I reread all 3 parts not too long ago so motivated to start again ! Thank you for all your hard work !
LondonsWhipHand chapter 23 . 9/24
Just so everyone is tracking - I am doing some editing on the existing chapters of each of the stories - I hope to follow it soon with some new content! Feel free to provide feedback on the changes
Thanks for reading! LWH
Naitch03 chapter 21 . 9/17
Just a heads up, the formatting on 22 is massively messed up. The chapter is unreadable.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17
Im fighting it out with the formatting - Ugh sorry guys I am about to take off writing on this story again - but there were/ are sections I have never liked - that I want to clean up before kicking off the next chapters. Hopefully I can get the formatting corrected and you can give it a read and provide feedback - I am shocked that some of you guys are still around and are still willing to read ! I love it ! You are awesome :) LWH
Guest chapter 23 . 9/17
Loved this fic when I first read it in 2012, and still love it now! The formatting on a few chapters is off though.
CMU chapter 13 . 9/17
Rereading the story again, chapter 13 doesn't display correctly, unreadible with html-commands. Please fix.
Guest chapter 21 . 2/22/2019
damn that ending tho.
emmakate261995 chapter 22 . 10/15/2018
This story was fantastic. Everything Batman was supposed to be. I love the Fox and Selina dynamic by the way. Really sweet.
jennimals2 chapter 22 . 9/22/2016
Absolutely loved this! Thanks for sharing
Oniton chapter 22 . 10/26/2015
Enjoyed this very much! Thanks for posting!
Marcus S. Lazarus chapter 22 . 6/27/2013
Interesting job, to say the least.
From the beginning, you created an intriguing exploration of how Gordon and Selina coped with the situations arising in an immediately post-Bane, post-Batman Gotham, cleaning up the immediate threats while also coping with the loss of the man who meant so much to them (To say nothing of Selina adapting to being in a position where local law enforcement officers actually like her).
I was a bit uncertain about relatively quickly Bruce showed up- it took a few chapters, but they weren’t exactly long ones-, but Selina’s thoughts on how Bruce and Batman are connected highlights what makes her far more effective as Bruce’s love interest than Rachel ever was; regardless of whether Bruce is Batman or Bruce Wayne, she can accept him as either, where Rachel placed conditions on their relationship and then didn’t even have the decency to tell him that it wasn’t going to work.
Keep up the good work; with some of the plot elements you’ve established here- Bruce and Selina exploring their lives together, the remaining mole in Wayne Enterprises, that kind of thing-, I have a feeling sequels are going to be VERY interesting…
Electricboa chapter 22 . 5/20/2013
I definitely like where this is going. That's a little odd to say when this story is technically 'complete,' but it feels more like an 'act 1' instead of a 'book 1.' Having Selina decide to help Gordon and Gotham was a touch I haven't really seen before, especially with everyone still thinking Batman died. You really did keep them apart for a lot longer than I expected. I thought you characterized Selina quite well, she is a difficult character to get right. Her interactions with Fox were especially fun to read, and I see her getting her way into Bruce's inner circle.

Like I said, I was surprised that it ended where it did, basically ending on a cliffhanger, but I'll be sure to pick it up in the next story.
tytyty chapter 22 . 4/9/2013
Great story, I enjoyed it immensely.
wedgegeck chapter 22 . 4/3/2013
Really enjoyed reading this story; in fact I am pretty much going to consider it canon as far as my own enjoyment of the films is concerned! Thanks for writing!
munaxoxox chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
amazing already !
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