Reviews for Demons Fall First
Sakihinata chapter 17 . 11/28/2019
Would Sebastian be Gabriel's baby brother?
Guest chapter 35 . 8/17/2018
THE BEEEST
Professor Indisposed chapter 3 . 7/19/2017
Woah...
LacieM chapter 1 . 4/8/2017
NBdear other readers, don't forget to restock your tissues before reading this
LacieM chapter 1 . 4/8/2017
OMG! this is very well written, especially the fight scenes not many can write the scenes as detailed as you are
Isabella981 chapter 1 . 7/6/2016
A lovely story indeed! Thank you ever so much for writing it, gave me the respite I needed
blackbutler415 chapter 26 . 6/2/2016
this actually made me cry. like what the hell this is really good if you make me cry
DaddysLiitleGirl chapter 35 . 5/24/2016
I must say after almost 2 years this story never cease my amazement. I re-read it and the part where Sebastian's son had me crying... Again. The feeling is still the same, I fell in love with it. Lol. Imma go cry in the corner now. XD
CausticDeity chapter 4 . 5/23/2016
it's stOOd not stUd
Guest chapter 34 . 5/16/2016
This was positively awesome! I would've liked to know how Viessa and Sebastian were alive, though. The ending was a great conclusion.
Guest chapter 35 . 11/30/2015
Thank you for the story :) this is one of the very best that I have ever read. Once again, thanks for the lovely read.
trinity456 chapter 14 . 11/24/2015
Up til this point, whenever you insert a flashback or memory of Viessa and her previous mater, I literally can't help but bawl and get all choked up on my tears to the extent of actually finding it hard to breathe. It's beautiful and enchanting, and this is one of the few times in which I grow such an emotional attachment to a fanfic. Amazingly done!
Trixie chapter 35 . 8/26/2015
THIS IS ONE HELL OF A FANFIC! It really amazed me how you kept Sebastian in character despite the melancholic scenes where he appeared. I mean, come on, a moping sebastian? Really? I can't even imagine it but reading your work, you made it possible for me without even feeling a bit of OOC-ness. I also loved the fact that Sebastian was actually Gabriel's little brother! And oh, I liked it when Grell was suddenly serious. It is my wish to imagine what would it be like if Grell was finally able to kick some senseout of himself and you granted it! If I were to rate this, i'll be saying 12/10!
mia chapter 35 . 7/17/2015
Dear safire lupe-san
Ahhh this story is So so beautiful. So perfect. So perfect.

But i really want to know how they survived. Did gabriel saved them? Or they were reborn? What did lucilla do to ciel? Will sebastian and viessa have a child? Who took lucifer's place? What happen to grell?
There so much question and so much plot holes that i could just scream cause i wanna know everything even the snack lucilla eats whenever she slacks off her work xD

this story would definitely be number 3 in my 'top 10 most fav black butler fanfic' and top 15 in '100 best fanfic ever'
Yes i have a list of best fanfics. I've been reading fanfic for 10 years now so i kinda see myself as a professional fanfic reader HAHAHAHA.

Much love, mia
Butterfly 1987 chapter 10 . 6/16/2015
Seems like Viessa should have resisted him more, romantically I mean.
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