this was so sad but it was well written

Excellent! Although I don't particularly care for the subject matter, you did it justice.

I have one small error correction (I think). For this sentence: "Beauty, she thinks, and reaches for another vile to experiment with." I believe the word 'vile' should be vial.

Your later stories are much better than the first ones you posted.

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This is so sad. I love Tali stories.

Amazing story, as always. Your talent for writing never ceases to amaze me. Yes, it was sad, but I loved the liberating feel of her death in the end. Looking forward to more and more fics from you!

I love it! Amazing!

Wow- this was incredibly beautiful and intense. The detail was what really made this come alive! Job well done!