I love it. Your writing style is amazing though it might seem complicated and hard to grasp it makes the story more awesome hehehe please update.

Please update this! I love it! I also love the style of writting it's really nice.

Oh gosh, this is really really good. Unique and all that jazz. Your writing style is amazing, by the way. Please update soon!

Oh gosh, I love this story so much. This is so well-written ;_;

Here I was looking for something to read and found this neat little thing. AND THEN I SEE ITS BY MY DEMYBRO! No wonder it was awesome. Your writing is just amazing as usual X3 and I love this concept and how you've put it together. I will definitely be following this one 3

I fucking love Alfred in this omg

kdlasdka GIL U ADORABLE BABU

Hmm, I'm seeing a lot of parallels between Tony Stark/Pepper Potts and Arthur/Liz here ;3 Whether that was intentional or no, kudos to you!

Also Alfred is just so fricking adorable with timing the carbon monoxide poisoning just right (now there's something you don't hear every day), and saying he's going to count it as cuddling, and nicknames and jsut ;laksdhfalisdfqwleakfhlkdshfa sdf a

Kay, gonna just continue flailing here while I wait for the next chappie

I absolutely LOVE this fic! Death!AlxArmsdealer!Artie IS fantastically original(XD), and it somehow reminds me of this popular AU where Al is a deveil and Arthur is a magician, because both contain the dark creaturexspecific human relationship. Though in this case, Arthur is physically normal and totally not gonna summon anything, haha.

Their meetings are..intriguing, or just HAWT if I go direct. They see each other through dreams and disguises; everytime they meet face to face Arthur has to be almost dead - WOW! Now this is the represention of Moe! Talkin' about dangerously in love!

PLEASE DO CONTINUE. Can't get enough of this excited feeling. Death!Alfred is PURE WIN!

Wow, death is quite literally courting Arthur. I'm so excited for this! I read Fragments before and it was beautiful. I believe this another great fic in the making.

this is really good, cant wait for more!

I hope you know I cackled at the fact that Alfred even used the word 'courting' in his sentence. It's such an old fashioned word, and I can never imagine Alfred ever using it, and that's what makes it so hilarious. XD But, then, I suppose Death HAS been around for a very long time, neh? :)

Keep up the good work!

Catzi

very unique XD Cant wait to read more!

This is fantastic. I have never wanted an update more than I do for this, right now. I just need to see and explore and learn more about this AU and your characters.

And yes, I think the Death courting a weapons manufacturer is original. Although I still get a vague 'Meet Joe Black' vibe in Death courting a rich human being. But, obviously, the charcaters are very, very different (and sexier).

I so can't wait for more! I'm actually in pain!

Do you know vaguely how many chapters this will be? I definitely need some kind of estimate, so I can prepare myself for the ride. I think if it ended too soon, I'd be devastated!

This. This is Prussia-level awesome material you've got here. I love the stories where it's Alfred who's the supernatural being and not Arthur, and him being Death? When America probably has the largest military in the world? a;ldshf;a you're really making me like this story, esp. with Al asking him on a -date- during a near-death experience, and Matty being Order (he would be, wouldn't he? Is Prussia Chaos then? x3) is just asdlk;fha;sl and Arthur totally is an adrenaline junky and just ;alskdhf;aldfa'sdfhas;fhkds;;

Expect more keyboard smashing in future chapters darling, because I expect that's just what this story's gonna do to me. It's a good thing, I swear.