update please

Chapter 13,am I mistaken is that lullaby in the Malay language ?

Oh wow I totally dig this story:)

Nvm Robert attacked her cleared it up

Lyanna hated Robert but slept with him? I’m so confused and it’s just the first chapter

Some of the things here are absolutely ridiculous like how a dragon somehow got to rheagar and dany they mounted the dragon and then saved bran while he falling. That time frame is absolutely ridiculous not to mention the fact that the dragon needs to fly to them without being noticed which is impossible. Then that valeryan steel dagger is impossible to be there. Cause little finger owns it and the lannisters would be stupid enough to give a assassin a dagger with heir sigil on it. Besides the lannisters would never waste a valeryan steel anything on a assassin.

great story

Too nice for ASoIaF/GOT. Sure you are writing fanfiction, but can you, please, respect some integral concepts of the original works. No wonder GRRM disfavors fanfiction. You make something that is a tale of political intrigue with a side dish of fantasy in a Medieval setting seems so silly and childish. Hope you improve on it. Goodluck.

I want to like it but you never go into detail how Robert didnt kill her. The biggest thing agains tthe story is that

Wait how the fuck does Rhaegar have a Dragon, and after the mad king you would assume that no more Incest would be obviuos yet he married viserys to his daughter, fucking dragons

i really enjoyed reading what you've written so far of this story. hope you get around to updating again soon.

Just when I think this story can't get anymore ridiculous, IT DOES. It's funny even though I don't think the humor is intentional. It's a hodgepodge of crap, but it's funny.

Not being mean but, I'm being honest the plot is just confusing to me because how your changing the main characters backgrounds and how the story is more about the OC's than Jon and Dany since the OC's got introdroced

everyone is a bit too understanding and nice in this fic. it is frustrating how many people these days want stories to be completely gritty and humorless, but you swing too far into the opposite direction. also, the dialogue is horrendous.

ok this makes no sense, it makes absolutely no sense for jon to be Roberts son. Its confirmed canon that on is lyanna and rhaegars son, while this fic may have been started before that, it was still obvious. Robert was also a pig of an before the rebellion, the only way lyanna could have a child him is if he raped her.