| Reviews for Never Forget This Day |
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Raeshi chapter 1 . 1/4/2014 Nice, love this pairing. Oops honey I forgot our anniversary followed by hot makeup sex. The part with Natasha, Clint and Thor being hardcore gamers was hilarious. |
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 1 . 3/13/2013 Amused. Roses are so...common. Good luck. Especially to Loki. And Tony, of course. |
LaPirataAna chapter 1 . 11/28/2012 aaw, I loved it! Super sexy, sweet and beautiful. :) Poor Tony - he never made it to an anniversary, and now that he did, the other person forgets?! That must've been terrible! But, I'm glad Loki remembered on his own, instead of having another remind him. And phew! That scene was just extremely sexy! haha, I loved it! :D |
GrinningFlowers chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 I loved this oneshot. It was just amazing, really. XD It was very enjoyable, sweet and sexy. I couldn't help but giggle at "No shower shenanigans today". |
Crystal M. Key chapter 1 . 9/7/2012 That was three kinds of adorable and two kinds of hot. I'd explain, but I don't want my mom to ask me why I'm blushing and giggling. Thanks! And Clint, Natasha, and Thor playing the shoot-em-up while Loki whined was hilarious. I'm guessing the reason they don't play games much is because Thor breaks too many controllers. Favorite qoutes: And that was where the trouble began. Normally Tony would let Loki sneak in to share the shower, but this time the door was decidedly locked, and Loki knew from experience that when a door was locked, it meant no shower shenanigans today. … "He's mad at me," he announced forlornly. Clint, Thor and Natasha were doing some sort of violent war video game, and they paid him no heed. He took a seat next to Thor anyway, as the three continued to blast at each other's video counterparts. "I don't know what I've done!" Loki said exasperatedly to his hands. "Die, motherfucker!" Clint yelled, stabbing at his console aggressively. "You son of a bitch!" Natasha responded, her eyes glued to the screen. "He won't talk to me, he won't even look at me," Loki sighed. "Maybe he's upset about yesterday, when I wouldn't go shopping with him." "Your lack of concentration, Barton, does you no favours!" exclaimed Thor gleefully. "Behold! The power and might of my hand grenade!" "No, no, no! NO! Thor! Dammit! Now I have to start again!" Clint complained. "Perhaps I was a little snappish towards him," Loki continued, anxiously, "but I was sure he perceived no ill will from me. He was quite normal afterwards." "Lady Natasha, do not think I will not blast you apart just because you're a woman!" boomed Thor, laughing as Natasha exploded into a fit as her character lost half its health. "Mother fucking, cock sucking, dirty bitch whore!" she yelled. "Clint, get my back! Let's take this fucker out." "My pleasure," Clint replied. "Your allegiance will fail, mortals!" Thor was shouting. "I have a trick up my sleeve!" Clint's and Natasha's screams of fury as Thor took them out with a few carefully aimed shots from behind a potted plant drowned out Loki's panicked blathering. "I WIN!" Thor announced as Clint threw his console at Thor's head, and Natasha bodily launched herself at Thor and started to pummel his face. … "Actually," said Clint, "I think the rain has stopped." "Not even the weather is on my side!" Loki despaired. "Fine! I shall walk in the sun! And it shall contrast with my ever growing misery!" He fled the room, but in time to hear Natasha ask Thor, "Was he always such a drama queen?" and for Thor to reply, "Yes. He was. Always." … "Hey!" he called out to a stranger who was walking past. The stranger jumped, and tried to scurry away. "Wait! What is the date today?" The man eyed him curiously. "The twenty eighth, why?" "By the Nine! How could I forget?" Loki cried out, clutching his hair. He sprinted away, his sole intent to get to Tony to apologise, to beg, to promise to never forget again. He caught sight of a flower seller by the edge of the park, and skidded to a halt. He dug in his pockets for loose change, and found a ten scrunched up at the bottom. "What'll it be, son?" the flower seller asked. "I'm in so much trouble. Is it orthodox to give flowers when one has forgotten their anniversary?" Loki panted. The flower seller's eyes widened. "Oh dear, son, you're in the dog house. I'd go with the roses." … Tony rolled his eyes. "Get up." Loki acquiesced, and stood, coming up to Tony and looking at him through his eyelashes. "How do you want me?" "Fuck…do you want to go upstairs?" Tony asked, running a hand through his hair. "No, here is fine," Loki said breezily, going over to the countertop, moving the roses and the piles of paper and tablets and random stuff Tony kept littered about. He swivelled around and leant back on his elbows. "So?" Tony eyed Loki up and down, letting out a long breath. "Umm, okay. If you're sure." "I'm sure. I don't want to risk running into my brother on the way back up to your room." Tony stepped up to Loki and began unbuttoning his shirt. "Our room," Tony amended, kissing Loki's throat, and moving down to kiss his chest as he revealed more. "Damn it, what was I angry about again?" "You know, I can hardly remember," Loki said, and they both chuckled. "Hurry up, Stark." "I'm doing it. I'm just enjoying the moment," Tony smirked. … "What was that you said earlier about 'please don't break up with me'?" Tony asked, in all seriousness. "Did you honestly think I would dump you just because you forgot some silly anniversary?" Loki looked away. "Well, yes. And it's not silly. I can't believe I forgot." "Don't be ridiculous," Tony mouthed at Loki's collarbones, and Loki felt goosebumps erupt all over his body. "I love you." "Are you going to fuck me or not?" Loki breathed, one gripping Tony's hair tightly, the other burying its fingernails in Tony's shoulder. Tony pressed a kiss to Loki's neck before retreating and going to fetch something from his desk. It turned out to be a condom and lube. "Do you just keep things like that all over the house?" Loki asked disbelievingly. "You have to be prepared," Tony smirked, as he came back over, pushing Loki flat on his back. "You never know when Angelina Jolie will wander in for a quickie." Loki narrowed his eyes, and growled. "You are mine, Tony Stark. Now make me yours." Tony's eyes dilated so that the iris was barely visible. |
Lifedrops chapter 1 . 9/6/2012 Clint: Oh the fucking pansies I think my ears will never recover from the shock of that motherfucking scream. I really fucking hate them, with the sex and-and the lovey-dovey bullshit! I'm pretty sure right now that Tony has bend Mister Drama Queen over his work and he's pounding into him. FUCK WHY DO I DO THIS TO MY FUCKING SELF! Maybe Loki has multiplied himself like that other time Tasha and I walked in on them-NO SHUT UP YOU PERVERT! Thor: Friend Barton are you okay? Clint: No I am not the fuck okay. Want to know why? Nat: Not really. Clint: Well I don't fucking care about your opinion you gingerbread bitch. Nat: I'm going to tear your limbs apart, starting with the one in your pants, Birdy. Start running. NOW. Clint: Can you jack me off first? Thor: Friend Barton! That is not the way to talk to a Lady! Nat: Listen to him, moron. Now where was I? Oh yes, I would just start killing you. Clint: Random thought; Where is Steve? And Bruce? Nat: Steve is jogging outside and saving cats and Bruce is at the...Ooooooh! Poor Bruce. Thor: What is going on Lady Natasha? Where is friend Bruce? Clint: Poor Brucie.. Nat: Well, if you want more info on what they did, you can just ask him, Hawkeye. *wink* Clint: BITCH! Thor: I still do not comprehend what is going on. Oh well, I'll go find me some tarts with pop to savour. Farewell my dear author, the story was most extraordinary. Nat: Esp. the smut. Clint:Ugh, stop this. I was the awesomest part of the story. *grins* All three: Until NEXT TIME! Lifedrops (do forgive me, I do this every once in a while) |
Tofs chapter 1 . 8/29/2012 Really cute. I love Loki's "Forgive me!" speech. Oh, you write Sherlohn! Yes! *off to read more* |
Phoenix xxxxx chapter 1 . 8/29/2012 Crap? Are you kidding! If this is your 'crap' gonna go check out your other work xD |
Katori22 chapter 1 . 8/26/2012 Ohhhh.. 3 How sweet! I love it! And I can't wait for next chapter of AitJ! :D |
a-chan chapter 1 . 8/24/2012 omg! this is so cute! and sexy loved it! totally loved it! 3 |
Post U Later chapter 1 . 8/24/2012 Okay That Was Great! Poor Tony, He Was So Mad At Loki. & Poor Loki, He Had No Idea Why Tony Was Man. |
ImLostForever chapter 1 . 8/21/2012 Ah! I loved it! And the smut was. Ahem. Good. Very good. Ahem. The video game scene too. Poor Loki sitting there, getting more and more upset, and those three twits are just shooting at eachother! Brilliant stuff, Millie. brilliant. And as usual, the best kind of Clint is the sweary kind of Clint. It sometimes makes me sad that neither Tony nor Clint nor Fury will be able to swear as much as they most rightfully should in the movies. Because, in my personal opinion, practically every other word out of Fury's mouth should be a curse word. And Clint should have the ability to come up with really random obscure, filthily obscene ones and just scream them out all the time. And Tony just says the f word a lot. But of course they can't do that, can they. Because even if they made the movie a 15, parents would still take their little kiddies to see it. Because /superheroes/. Grrr it makes me so mad that the scriptwriters are so restricted from letting the characters swear. Grrr What an amazing fic! Love, Ellie. |
ShillyTheEpicNinja chapter 1 . 8/20/2012 That was 20 minutes worth?! The people I'd kill for your talent... |
Cosmopolis chapter 1 . 8/20/2012 OMG, this was just sooooo awesome! Loki is so cute I could eat him(L) Thanks for this! |
lou chapter 1 . 8/20/2012 awww, I loved this! The scene with Loki trying to talk to Thor et al really cracked me up :) |