Reviews for Summer with Snape
sakshiagarwal017 chapter 103 . 6/29
wow
Would be a pleasure if you read one of my book sakshiagarwal017
stuovam chapter 103 . 6/7
Snape is a space idiot. How can a teacher who runs a Department be such an uncaring idiot? Snape is not twenty and he is not Sirius black that would lose his head from a he also blunts periodically. It felt like he was paying off with gifts from Harry.
Harry. I feel so sorry for him. No one wants to treat a child. It is not clear why they went to the doctor. Harry is very small I don't even know how you would write the part about the goblet of fire. I expected that by the end of his bladder and regression will pass.
More space and comfort. Where in the middle of the story did the white Elf disappear to?

Why do I want to beat Hermione? She's so annoying.

Why doesn't anyone treat Harry or at least give him strengthening potions? What good was Snape's potion? Where was the result? Why not take the child to a magic hospital? Why was he carrying a child with broken legs? He could only make the situation worse. Now Snape is going on an expedition and the children are going to a children's camp but why not give them to Sirius.

Sirius. It is absolutely not clear how they tried it on. But Sirius is a very interesting character, although not in his own character.
Lupin. Here is Lyubip very similar to the canonical character. I've seen him like this in books and movies. It is often result in fanfiction as a wise good man and it's not exactly Canon. But your Remus is the best.
This is a very nice story but not quite complete. You left a lot of questions. But it's light and it's nice to read, despite the amount of urine in the text.
Guest chapter 7 . 6/5
It was a a good chapter
stuovam chapter 59 . 6/6
Why doesn't anyone treat Harry? Why not to go to Mungo's? They grow new bones there! Why not teach Harry a charm or a self-drying spell?Why doesn't he wear special underwear during the day but only at night?
stuovam chapter 51 . 6/5
The twins are a couple of years older than Harry and Ron. As they are so easily related to teenagers? Fred and George Weasley are still children themselves. Where did you get this strength?
Fio chapter 76 . 5/18
Nice fic
James thomad chapter 103 . 5/6
I love it please make more
P. S I am a fan of Harry potter
sakshiagarwal017 chapter 103 . 5/6
Surely worth reading,️️
Harry Potter chapter 100 . 4/19
good
Guest chapter 21 . 4/9
...Good, you're missing some commas, but otherwise, this is awesome.
Anonymous chapter 22 . 2/20
gr8! thx for sharing this
Katie chapter 14 . 11/27/2019
It was really good. Just one question...
Why does Harry act so childish even though he is like 15.
Katie chapter 12 . 11/17/2019
I love that you use the MoDeRn way of toys like Pokemon.
That's all I really have to say. This chapter was a roller coaster just like the one Harry gets on and then pees him self...
I rate this 5 stars!
Katie chapter 11 . 11/17/2019
This chapter is very original and exciting. It shows how Snape is really coming to like Harry as a son. But, I just don't like the fact that Severus Snape of all the professors is being THIS nice...
Other than that I think this was an extraordinary Chapter I can't wait to read the next one. I rate this 4 stars.
Katie chapter 10 . 11/17/2019
It is very interesting, but a little violent for those who are still young...
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