| Reviews for I Want You Dead |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2019 The part about Sophia being thrown out the car was not realistic in the slightest. Plus, Dana using a gun? We have no proof in this version of the universe that guns exist. Nice try. But you missed the bullseye |
 Fanfic girl of all worlds chapter 1 . 11/12/2017 Holy crown this needs more! So intense and interesting and and and I LOVE IT! |
| brittni chapter 1 . 9/15/2017 you monster! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2016 i want to see the video movie trailer |
| why did they cal chapter 1 . 4/7/2016 her that bugtie |
| Decembra chapter 1 . 8/26/2015 It even more sad! I hate it in stories when people get killed. But its life and it make it more interesting. This was clever but I've got to admit I don't like Dame Devin very much. How could she do that to them. Why not kidnap them and hold them hostage for years until Delancey gets crowned queen. Sounds much better than Dame Devin murdering them. |
| BookFreak147 chapter 1 . 3/17/2015 This is so depressing but glad you gave it a good and in my opinion,I think Dame Devin did it all out of for a hopeless ! |
| thisuserisnolongerinuse chapter 1 . 11/16/2014 wow is that it |
| sparkles321 chapter 1 . 10/3/2013 Please update soon! It's been forever! ;) |
| souleatertsubakiepicness chapter 1 . 6/12/2013 awesome description. write more. and.. why did she have a gun? |
| LacinLissian chapter 1 . 1/10/2013 I think you did a very great and convincing job at creating a prequel :) |
| Mrs Snowball chapter 1 . 1/5/2013 I think you've done a great job with this. What I find most interesting is that, while Dame Devin is still a horrible person, there's something about her that's almost sympathetic, especially in the first part of the story. I'm not saying it justifies her actions, but it's good to know why she does these things, and why she thinks it's acceptable. It makes her slightly more relatable, which isn't a bad thing in a character (and it's certainly better than just portraying her as completely evil). It also explains a lot about her relationship with Delancey. I particularly liked the part where Dame Devin assumed that Sophia would never pick her to be Lady Royal; makes the ending to the movie somewhat ironic. Oh, and I don't doubt for a minute that she could kill someone. This is the same person who arranged to have a family killed in a car crash, not to mention the same person who was perfectly willing to leave a whole neighbourhood homeless. |
| destinysblue chapter 1 . 12/2/2012 wheres the fuckin sex |
| dmsm chapter 1 . 9/9/2012 cant wait for the next chapter xx |
| Vitty chapter 1 . 9/9/2012 I think this is a very tragic story. Dana Devin is a sneaky, full of bitter I bet, and cunning villain. She sets the "crashing place". I like how Dana cannot be defeated by Lilith by kill her. The story is good because it's very intrigue and full of blood. I give this FF: ***** (I love it!) |
