| Reviews for The Bet |
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Wangz chapter 14 . 9/20/2018 UPDATEEEE |
Wangz chapter 9 . 9/20/2018 HOLDEN HISCOCK |
Wangz chapter 8 . 9/20/2018 Yamcha reek of other women |
Wangz chapter 6 . 9/20/2018 jajahahahahah MRS BRIEF OPENED HER EYES |
Wangz chapter 5 . 9/20/2018 LMAO YAJIROBE |
Wangz chapter 3 . 9/20/2018 yasss |
Wangz chapter 2 . 9/20/2018 Yamcha done loss |
Wangz chapter 1 . 9/20/2018 i hate yamcha |
KawaiiInu-TaiYoukai4ever chapter 7 . 4/3/2018 Wow...just...wow. One of the biggest mysteries of the DBZ universe is how the hell Vegeta and Bulma became an item. It's plagued me for almost a decade now and I'm happy to say that this story is giving me the much-needed closure I've been missing. Admittedly, I haven't watched DBZ in a few years (after GT, I completely abandoned the series). This story has me on the edge of seat and I can't put it down! It's revitalizing the series of my childhood in a way that my adult-self can fully enjoy. Thank you for making me fall in love these characters all over again! Keep doing what you're doing! ~K.I.T.Y |
kclinda chapter 14 . 3/26/2018 hahaha! wow! that was intense. I agree that at first Vegeta was struggling with all those new feelings. He had so much confusion in him until he finally accepted everything around Buu's show off... I really like your story. The development between them is pretty good, AND I do think that Yamcha is stupid enough to do something like this. |
DBZBV1991 chapter 14 . 12/3/2017 Holy moly. That was...hot. Like lava-hot! I'm so hard in love with your version of VegeBulafter reading your notes, I have to agree with you that Vegeta probably didn't accept the relationship and Trunks until much later. So, I have to say that your characterisation of the two is really in character and true to the animated series! Job well done! There is only one thing where I thought Bulma would react differentlyafter Yamcha and Vegeta opening up about the bet, I was certain Bulma would explode and give the some of her mind about how freaking sexist this is (which it kind of is xD). This counts especially for Yamcha because he was kind of offering her. But this was just my expression :3 I can't wait for another chapter of their unhealthy and weird and super hot relationship! And don't worry about the lemon; I think you don't need to say the A, C or F words to convey hotness or be explicit! I really like your style of writing in this story. Keep going! |
zfj chapter 14 . 10/22/2017 Good god. What a unhealthy insane relationship between the two, and I loved every second of it. Your story is hilarious and ingeniously written. You got Vegeta down nicely. Love the dynamic here! |
Tootsy2836 chapter 14 . 10/22/2017 Yes please continue... I would love to read all about it |
GOLLUM E HIJOS chapter 14 . 10/22/2017 You ar ... |
BV4ever chapter 14 . 10/22/2017 OMG! So glad you decided to continue this story! The Briefs are hilarious...sitting there listening to what probably sounded like an episode from The Animal Kingdom...Lol! The undeniable passion between V/B leaves you begging for more! Vegeta is a REAL animal! And Bulma seems to bring out that beast! Lol! Can't wait to see what happens next! |