Reviews for Chronicles of Absolution: The Phoenix Rises
klu chapter 12 . 12/2/2013
So this one was emotionally charged... Even knowing Angela's death wouldn't be permanent, you made it feel so 'real' with the way you conveyed Sam and Dean's emotions.
I was bleary-eyed for the first 7 chapters...
I am excited to see how Angela's presence is important to Lilith as time goes on and how other influences continue to affect the trio and their role in destiny.
Your OCs here, especially Nick and Gus are really shining. I liked Nick the first time, but his small piece here was perfectly placed to both add credibility to his (moral) character and fuel Sam's jealousy - both of which I feel are important. As for Gus, she seems important, not just in her abilities and friendship to the brothers, but in learning that Angie turned her. Sam mentioned it before and maybe Dean could consider it as an option... I am sure that is something you wanted your readers to think on and well, I'm thinking...

I was a little disappointed that Sam didn't learn about Angie's romantic feelings for him, either when he read her journal or by Dean just out-and-out telling him. I would have enjoyed that conversation of Sam saying Angie died mad and hating him and Dean saying 'No Sammy, she loved you; had feelings for you and didn't know how to tell you.'

The 'temple' adventure was neat and fun; wish that Vera was gone for good. I don't like bullies... I half expected to find out she was demon-possessed when she was interrogating Jo - she just seemed too anger- and hate-filled without demonic influence... But some people are just D-bags... Great Job on creating a character I totally love to hate with everything I have in me (that really is a glowing complement).
Klainelover chapter 12 . 4/19/2013
You know I was about ready to cheer because Vera was killed...but at the same time I figured something was going to happen. The bitchface I have right now. You and your damn cliffhangers. lol. Soo mean! But on a good note. YAY! SAM AND ANGIE MOMENT! xD haha.
Klainelover chapter 11 . 4/19/2013
Okayyy, this is chapter was just awesome. I can't explain why for some reason, but loved it. Maybe...idk. I'm confused over myself and why I can't explain. But crap, Vera! Grr...can I just...idk...I wanna say kill but that doesn't get you anywhere sometimes. Hmmm...Samm...Hmmm... lol
Klainelover chapter 10 . 4/19/2013
You had me a bit scared there to the point I was like Nooo...if her body is burned whats going to happen! But obviously they got with Angie possessing Jo of course. :D Loved the reunion, well as well as a reunion they could get at the moment. (: Had me tear up a bit in happiness.
Klainelover chapter 9 . 4/19/2013
Yay! Bobby is there and learning more about Absolution, awesomes :D Okay so the not be caught thing didn't work as well as planned. Now question is, what is going to happen between them all.
Klainelover chapter 8 . 4/19/2013
I really like Gus and I am happy that she is around. (: As for Vera...can I just full on attack her now! . UGH!
Klainelover chapter 7 . 4/19/2013
I liked the Bobby and Cerebus moment, it was cute. I needed a cute moment (: So Jo and Nick have met up with Cerebus in tow, guess it's time to figure things out.
Klainelover chapter 6 . 4/19/2013
Loving the Jo and Angie moments, while filled with a purpose you have those sister like moments and its nice. (: Aww...Dean is now releasing all the emotions he had pent up. Are you trying to kill me with sadness here?! :(
Klainelover chapter 5 . 4/18/2013
awwww! Sammy! :( It's okay she knows you're sorry and didn't mean to hurt you. I just want to give him a giant hug and never let go. And of course Dean always being the big brother and being there even when he is hurting as well. Soo much pain, I want to cry :(
Klainelover chapter 4 . 4/18/2013
Well...wonderful code word by the way lol Sparkle-fingers. Angie or Nick come up with that? haha. Anyways, Crowley...he is never going to leave this alone is he?! I may like him but Jeez! Can't even imagine if someone called me and asked to steal a body of a friend (in this case someone he likes). Can't wait to see where this goes, but I do hope they get her body in time. No burning!
Klainelover chapter 3 . 4/18/2013
This story so far just has me going, WHAT?! lol I understand a bit better now, but I wonder what Angie is up to now to get back.
Klainelover chapter 2 . 4/18/2013
Woah Woah Woah and Woah! What?! I'm confused now. Angie is dead but Jo see's her when looking in the mirror and I guess hear her in her mind. Plus she is having weird moments happen where she has no control. Hmmm.
Klainelover chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
WHAT DO YOU MEAN ANGIE IS DEAD?! I did not sign up for this! and Now the Centurion makes an appearance. Already I can tell this is gonna be a very very interesting story and probably very painful. (Well you kinda warned me lol)
SPN Mum chapter 12 . 10/20/2012
Hmmm, so Angela was brought back, and everyone is happy. Except someone wants Sam dead. Could that possibly have been Lilith talking to Vera? O.o If so, Sam had better be really careful now. I hope that they will all get along for a long time now. Dean's deal is getting closer, and I don't think that Angela has a way out of it yet. Oh dear!
SPN Mum chapter 11 . 10/20/2012
Ah-ha! They managed to get out and found Vera at the temple already, and they need to stop her. I have a feeling that Angela 'popped' into Sam when she left Jo. I wonder how Sam will feel about that? lol
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