| Reviews for An Everlasting Flame |
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Eragon135790 chapter 21 . 5/23 great ff i hope that maybe now (6 years later) the ff will be somewhen continued. |
KaKashi's Okami chapter 21 . 7/9/2019 Awesome! The only thing that tossed me off was the first chapter, you said it was a quick death in a car accident, the rest of the story said she was lingering in the hospital before she died...unless I read the first chapter wrong, otherwise I quite enjoy this story |
thewhiteangel213 chapter 21 . 7/3/2019 uh hi.. i really love your story amd wanted to know if you dropped it or not so um.. good luck with whatever you are doing. :) |
Rainy-Round chapter 20 . 12/12/2017 I like it it's been a while since I've come across a decent si oc that I haven't already read so thanks for writing so well with no (obvious to me at least) mistakes in spelling or Grammer. Although I did realize one mistake in the next chapter when aoba says Hiroshi is to go with him to the mines. Earlier it was planned that hiroshi was to portray the younger one 4 years old and obviously he'll stick with his 'mum' rather than go with his 'dad' to the mines which is no place for children. |
Guess chapter 21 . 10/30/2017 Amazing story. Very realistic and intriguing |
Kejmur chapter 21 . 12/20/2016 In anime fillers Land of Vegetables had ninja using flower based techniques, so maybe this would be an option ? Also I'm curious who those ninja in Kusagakure are. There are few options I guess: A) Last attempt from Danzo to recruit her into ROOT while also set up a trap. B) Bloodline hunters ? May be both Kumogakure (who said that trying to kindnap Hyuuga heiress was their only attempt after war) so it would be fatal if they learned of her ability. Or even Hunter Nin from Kiri. C) They are indeed normal Jonin 3 genin, but I doubt it. If they were only just this, someone who reported them would at least notice some things which would connect them into certain village, so they are probably more experienced then this. D) Simply wandering ninja like from Watari Clan without any connections to any villages. Anyway I like this story and looking forward next chapters ;). |
Ea chapter 15 . 12/11/2016 awesome as ever |
Ea chapter 13 . 12/11/2016 nice, awesome chapter |
Ea chapter 11 . 12/11/2016 *screams* did I mention the awesomeness of this story? |
Ea chapter 7 . 12/11/2016 this is amazing |
Well done chapter 1 . 11/15/2016 I realy like the it about being a jew. It helpsbring a certain touch of ... realism to the fic. -well done |
Gladoo89 chapter 21 . 10/13/2016 I quite like this story, and hope you'll update one day! ;) |
Guest chapter 21 . 8/24/2016 update |
someonethatreadfanfics chapter 14 . 8/14/2016 stap, everyone accept everything without a second, like, your fathah died, and they're like, okay |
THe great me chapter 5 . 6/25/2016 I thought that Suikazara could only do flowers and flowering plants... |