Brilliant.

I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

I liked your look inside Kenneth/Aaron. One of the things I liked best about this movie was that Aaron has a sweetness to him that we never really got to see with Jason.

You make me want to rush back to the theatre, lol! Damn, I love this movie...and your story. You have a great way of pulling your reader into the scene, because I was holding my breath a little there. Well done. I hope you write a lot more, and will look forward to it if it happens. Thanks again. :)