| Reviews for Twofaced Riddle |
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ThunderSphinx chapter 13 . 7/31 What's with the kid spells? Harry is a grown man. Why so weak? He should have pounded Loki into the dirt with ease. WTF. You completely nerfed Harry. Ummm... OK. I knew this was obviously an AU, but still. You went too far. HP magic is vastly superior to most of what they can do in the MCU. |
Guest chapter 20 . 5/1 This is fabulous. Please do continue the story. Eagerly waiting for more chapters. |
nessiesmith2012 chapter 3 . 2/19 Wow even at 41 harry is stupid. How did he live that long with his under achieving and very low intelligence level? Ron must have been the minister of magic if harry of all ppl with no ambition, no talents, no confidence and the lowest iq possible was able to get into a secretive RESEARCH program as the unspeakables. |
Guest chapter 15 . 2/12 Harry is supposed to be in his early forties right? Why is he reacting like he's in his twenties? Great story though! |
AminaS chapter 20 . 8/31/2019 This is an amazing story. One of the best crossovers I've read. I hope you would reconsider continuing it if at all possible. Maybe give us an update as to why youre unable to if so. |
Guest chapter 20 . 8/15/2019 Really sad that you never continued. IMHO this had been one of the 2 best Avenger crossovers. |
Mina chapter 20 . 12/16/2016 I like your work...so, why you don't write the next chapter? Please continu |
TheSkyeDragon chapter 20 . 12/7/2016 AKSJDHFALKJSDF PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE THIS ITS SO AWESOME, AND GAAAHHH THE THREE BROTHERS! THIS MAY SEEM MORBID BUT I WANT TO SEE HARRY DIE AGAIN XD BUT GAAHHH I LOVE THIS! |
purpleradiance chapter 2 . 10/13/2016 Great story! |
InsaneIsBestSane chapter 20 . 10/1/2016 Love the story! I hope you continue it. |
ranlynn chapter 20 . 9/10/2016 Just discovered this story. Very nice & I hope you are still working on it. I've known fic authors tgat have taken several years to finish a story so I have hope. |
Guest chapter 20 . 7/13/2016 More please? This is absolutely amazing. |
wildcat1144 chapter 20 . 6/1/2016 I like your concept on things ) |
Mylon chapter 2 . 3/30/2016 Oke, this just proved my point on several instances. Rule number one of apparition you end up in the spot you visualize. Since Harry was sure of his destination, he would either end up there or would not apparate at all. Second, how in gods name do you end up 300 meters above the ground while still being in the same city... If you would apparate halfway across the world, and thus forget to include the fact that the earth is round, it would be believable. But for Harry to end up 300 meters in the air, in a different place where he intended to be... Sound like you're dealing with either a full blown idiot or some other insanely wonky stuff. The fact that you say that Harry practiced a lot to get the sound of his apparition down... I really don't want to know... Also my physics might be a bit rusty, but if you're 300 meters in the air, and start with no speed, you have at least several seconds before you hit the ground, the second apparition confirms that... So how in gods name can a wizard wind up dead like that... Never heard of apparition continue to carry motion. If it did, a lot more wizards would've ended up splatted on the ground, and it would've been mentioned as one of the dangers of apparition. Last but not least, you are trying to paint Harry as your average wizard, while at the same time making him immortal? Sorry not buying it. So unfortunately it appears as this story is not for me. Stark inventing some teleport device that pulls someone across realities by accident, believable. Harry being you're average nobody wizard, less believable but acceptable as canon. The rest comes off as literal Sci-Fi while breaking several magical laws... It just doesn't sound the least bit believable to me :( :S So yea sorry but it appears this story is not for me, shame to be honest as this could've been a great story in my opinion. |
Mylon chapter 1 . 3/30/2016 Oke, I have to say this because it makes no sense whatsoever... You have a Harry Potter who is not gifted, just you're average student. (or at least that is why you described him as) Who somehow beats Voldemort as a fluke... Oke that's still canon, sorta. Who then goes to work for the magical researchers of Britain, who only 'supposedly' take the best of the best of the best. Which makes no sense whatsoever. I mean you're average student does not get invited by the top magical researchers of Britain without some very very good explanation. I haven't heard one, his 'Master of Death' issue wasn't know when he started working at the DoM... So how do you explain him working for the most secret organization in Britain. Hermione, yes they would want her badly, especially if they only go into research but Harry if they have no combat unit? It's like hiring someone who only has a high school degree to work on advanced physics... Secondly, Harry being 41... Means we are in 2021... Which means that Tony pulled Harry not only across realities, but also through time... At the same time it also suggests that Harry is older or at least around the same age as Tony. (since we don't know Tony's age, but post first avengers movie suggests mid thirties maybe early forties) After just reading the first chapter, I really don't know what to think... The summery/plot sounded good/great but I guess we'll find out. |