Reviews for Embers
Anon chapter 7 . 6/9
Well I'm here reading a story from 2015 a Zuki story at that which happens to be my favorite underrated ship and character Suki. I Just want to say that I have been enjoying your story it's really good and looks like shit is about to go down. But it seems you forgotten about this story, but hey who am I to say this when I just barely got into the Atla thanks to Netflix and some comics i read. Oh and I don't think they are OoC at all, and it's nice to give some personality to Suki and work with what little we got of her. Thanks for writing and sharing this story, got here a bit too late lol.
Ulquihime chapter 7 . 6/6/2019
Tu historia estaba demasiado buena como para olvidarla
Guest chapter 7 . 2/28/2019
Please update the story
meischmeisch chapter 7 . 8/11/2018
Helloooo! I finished atla recently and i did not expect to ship zuki. really love your story n the way you portray the characters 33333 im so happy to read a story where suki and zuko arent already in a relationship(plus smut though i dont mind it Dx) and actually get to read them develop their relationship further :DD its been three years since this fanfic has been updated, yet i will wait for it! ** i hope you are doing well and please take your time updating this fanfic. Keep up the good work c:
Mr. Honest chapter 1 . 2/10/2018
One of the most well-written fanfictions I've read! Great story and I hope you can continue it someday!
Guest chapter 7 . 11/2/2017
Still awaiting, i know this story is good for sure.
tabjoy13 chapter 7 . 8/25/2017
Wait, aren't Ty Lee's eyes gray? And aren't Suki's eyes blue? I could be wrong...
We are indeed waiting! No pressure though.
tabjoy13 chapter 3 . 8/25/2017
But I thought Zuko knew that his honor came from himself and was not something to be earned by doing someone else's bidding?
I'm enjoying the story so far!
Mr. Honest chapter 6 . 5/6/2016
Please! PLEASE! CONTINUE!
Mr. Honest chapter 7 . 5/5/2016
Please continue!
Guest chapter 7 . 3/23/2016
Please update! I love this fanfiction so much and I think the characters are pretty spot on! I like to read fanfics that are clean and actually explain why Zuko and Suki started to get closer! They are so cute and it makes my shipper heart go bonkers!
Celestia's Paladin chapter 7 . 3/1/2016
"Azula. How could I not have let her enter the story?" Well you did off Iroh. So thing are getting interesting and diverging from canon.
Mr. Honest chapter 7 . 1/26/2016
This is such a great story! I just started reading and I am really interested in where this story goes! I hope you update soon!
ViceVersaRiley chapter 7 . 12/31/2015
A very well written story so far. I like how you actually attempt to keep your grammar in check, unlike many other fanfiction writers. I also enjoy how you portray Zuko. His character seems realistic in these circumstances. It's good how you were trying to follow the comic books. However, I have a question; why is Iroh dead? Are you making him deceased on purpose in order to benefit your story line or is it just because you didn't know he was still alive during "The Promise"? When I first started reading this, I thought you were about to go all ANTI ZUKO but I slowly came to realize and appreciate the relationship you were trying to build between him and Suki, even if they did start off a bit rocky. I had a different interpretation of her interactions and feelings with Zuko in "The Promise" so it was an interesting perspective to see her seem so...what's the word...apprehensive towards him? I don't know, that still is a little too strong to express what I am trying to say and it's not exactly what I am going for. Another thing; I agree with what you commented on a few chapters back. I think Mai and Suki are a little OOC in this fanfiction. Seeing Ty Lee possibly viewing Zuko as a love interest surprises me. I look forward to seeing what love triangles play out before all this is over. I feel bad for Suki. She's going to be having it rough for a while, especially once she realizes she has feelings for Zuko. I like how subtle the Zuki (that's the Zuko and Suki ship name by the way, since you asked about it in your A/N in the 1st chapter) moments are and how they are gradually progressing. This is one of the few fanfics I have found on here so far where there is a decent plot and it is actually telling the events that lead to Zuko and Suki beginning to see each other in a romantic sense, instead of jumping right into the smut. So in other words, keep up the good work! I have a bad time with procrastination too so I can't talk much but...please update as soon as you can! I understand life can get busy though, so don't get too stressed about it. If just writing a sentence a day on the fanfic helps you still keep in touch with it while also giving you more time to do whatever else you want in life, then by all means do it (I need to take this advice too)! lol Have a blessed day. :)
Mr. Honest chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
Awesome story! Please continue!
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