This is very interesting. I hope to see more soon.

You had me intrigued by the summary and hooked by the first chapter, the perfect blend of what a good story needs. Reading this I have no complaints, and considering how much I moan at people thats impressive (my own fics haven't been updated in years and are totaly crap) I would kill to write as well as you do. Looking foward to more, 10/10 for the fic - love the slow character development and small jumps between the years.

This is an absolutely brilliant story; I was hooked from the first chapter alone. It’s realistic, has good character development and no firm commitment to relationships at this early juncture. Not to mention NO Grammar or Spelling mistakes at all (as far as I can see) now that is a rarity in fanfiction – nice to see though. I look forward to your next update I would never have imagined a blood-mage/demon-hybrid taking a Templar home to meet the family. Like the plausible Leliana aspect possibility as well. 10/10 for the fic.

I am reading this fic.

I am impressed by the fact you are willing to take a unique story point instead of reinterating the same gameplay point over and over again.

I will be interested on where you plan on taking this story as it seems like it could go anywhere. I am particularly interested to see if hawke can keep her family together though the coming times until the events of DA2.

wow this is nice. I can see the inner angst in this story. also, how long until malcom dies and how will she act?

i like it. i would have prefured one of desire but rage works just as well