ok i love it

awh too cute.

I think that was so...GOOD! You're realy talented. Keep writing Gravitation fic's, oh and god bles your skils.

The little voice in my head: what are you doing

oh shut up!

The little voice in my head: I know you don't mean that

*glares* what ever. What are you anyway?

The little voice in my head:hu,hu,hu*mufled breathing*...I am your father

ha ha very funny *sarcasticly

The little voice in my head: OK OK I am your mind the side that allways wins. *grining evily*

Whatever

The little voice in my head: oh yea before I forget can I say something?

Whatever

The little voice in my head: O..kay *srugs* Youtalent wich means keep writting

Wow, the first thought that comes to my mind is that this fic should have so many more reviews. So many more Gravi fans should read this, because it's such a deep view into Yuki Eiri's character. Only problems I had with it was that Aka, an OC, played such a big part, and it got a little technical at times, but even those aren't really faults. Although, I suppose you could've used Tohma for Aka or something, but the technicality added to the believability of the fic, so it wasn't a problem at all. Only other complaint I have is that it's so short! You NEED to write more Gravi fics! I already love your Weiss Kreuz fics, but I'd love to see more Gravi from you, definitely. You have what seems like a personal understanding of Yuki and that makes your charactization of Shuichi very IC too, at least to me, but I'm no expert on writing in character, hehe. Yes, so write more! Other than that, a few minor spelling/grammer, but wow, your english is amazing. It amazes me how europeans are fluent in 2,3,4, and even more languages. That's just incredible to me. Anyway, please, please write more Gravi fics? Please? As much as I love Weiss Kreuz, you've got a ton of WeiB fics and only a couple of Gravi. Please lend some more of your talent to the Gravi fandom?

It's so unbelievable that this fic has only 11 reviews, but I guess part of it is because it's an earlier one, before Tokyopop started releasing Gravi in the United States and so it's kinda faded into the background. I am definitely going to recommend this fic to my readers, it's great. You're one of my favorite writers now, both for Weiss Kreuz and for Gravitation. Keep writing!

Wow! That was really great, I loved it! Seriously, I mean, I really loved every chapter! - Good job!
Ja ne!
Sasami

you are really precise. it was no ordinary feat to read everything coz you got everything to the itty bittiest part. its like reading a psych/help yourself book. very educational if i may so and informative. i somehow strayed coz it didnt feel like a gravi fic anymore but more of a case study. but all in all, you did a very impressive work. omedetou atsureki-san!

this was a really good fic! )

I must saw...wow...that was on eof the most powerful and deeply moving fics I've ever read. The plot has no fault...two little things. It's perfeCt not perfeKt and control not controlE

Only spelling a couple grammar things like "didn't understood" (note: I couldn't find the exacty ones, but they were like that. Tense agreement.) Do you have a beta? That would eliminate such minute errors! I'll be yours if you like!

if you're interested

I was hoping this ficcy was on the best website in the world.. but I guess it's not, so I'll review it on this evil server of evilly doom instead.

Waaaaai! Now I see why Yuki is such a baka and I want to strangle him every 3 seconds! . This was really good! Poor Shuichi... *huggles the pink haired ball of caffiene* But at least everything is good now. . Yay!

I Love your story! Of all the fan fiction I've read, this is my favorite!

I love the way you show their feelings. Its very detailed and it makes sense. I love the way you dig in Yuki's feelings.

I kinda felt sad when I finished reading the story cuz I wanted to read more.

Keep up the good work, can't wait for more Fic from you!

laterz

daryl

I tried by best holding back my tears. You actually made me shed a few! Really angsty stuff. *glomps* This was great! *pokes* I'm glad you ended it with a happy ending cuz otherwise you would've left me feeling depressed. *pokes again and skips off finding another fic* _

Wai! That was beautiful! I cried throughout almost the whole thing * You do angst really well! *hugs* Keep writing!

;_; OMG! That was truly amazingly. I haven't cried so much from a fic. Ever! This has got to be one of the best angst stories ever! ;_; It is truly truly emotional, and very angsty. I should know, I have 7 tissue paper balls to prove

it! ;_; Great fic! Best angst I've read in a long time.

Awesome Gravi fic, I really enjoyed it. I was glad that Yuki and Shuichi got back together in the end. Write more! _

Hey, good fic! Keep up the good work :)