I need more

Very charming story! Glad I found this.

I KNEW Jane would read the note! Yes! Love it.

This is great. I love their subtle intimacy. I also love the three lines at the end with Branson, Thomas, and Jane noticing them together. So sweet and funny.

What a terrific story! and loved the ending!

this was soo beautiful
enjoyed thoroughly as the other chelsie fics!

I just read this story again, because I remembered how much I loved it the first time. It was every bit as good the second time around. I could just picture them at the edge of a clearing in the woods, with the moonlight shining on them, and him watching her instead of the birds...so romantic...sigh! Huge thanks :-)

That was beautiful ! Completely in character for both. Thanks for the sweet read!

I loved it! Preety please with a cherry on top can you continue.

What a sweet moment you did here. Very nice to read.
Really you should give your fics some chapters x LOL
I would love to see how things have changed to them after that night, specially with Branson, Thomas and Jane knowing that they were out in the forest in the middle of the night.

Jane you big asdfgjkl!
I hop you decide to write a sequel it was lovely!

beautiful! Really. I was totally swept away by the wonderful pictures this story created inside my head.

Clever. Sweet too. Definitely needs more chapters.

Too cute! Of course Branson would react that way... Loved Mr. Carson's apology. Just lovely all around

Yai! Great story i remember reading on LJ! As it arrived today I've taken it as my treat b'day fic too now! ;-)