Ok, I don't wanna be that guy, but it is really Watchog Or something like that.
WatchDog?
Its a meerkat
A DARN MEERKAT!
FOR PETES SAKE!
Sorry
Oh, and can you mix in answering questions in this?
It's okay if you don't.
I got a kingdom to run! Farewell!

And the Caterpie? Scollipede. Sorry, I wasted the other chapter review calling out da ref.

FNAF! CALLED ITT!

God... I hope you correct this chapter soon. that was Snivy's SECOND battle.
Ok...
As for your character... can you direct me to the first fanfic he was in?
I want to learn about him.
Ok
Farewell, back to the End! I got a kingdom to run, you know.

Good story

Been a little while since I last reviewed this, and Scolipede must've been that 'Purple Caterpie' from before.

Dante's been contacted by a Legendary Pokémon and tasked with helping defeating Team Plasma, this should be interesting.

Anyways, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Semper Fi - The Constitutionalist -

interesting so when will dante reveal he is a dragon, also since he is a dragon does that mean female dragon pokemon will be highly attracted to him?

Each person gets their own paragraph for dialogue.
EXAMPLE:
"I wish it was Friday," said Bob.
"I agree," said Jason.

Man, it's been a while since I've read this story. Glad to see that this is still going. I'll have to reread this a bit to jog my memory on this story.

Anyways, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter and wonder what'll be of the 'Purple Caterpie'. Semper Fi - The Constitutionalist -

Very interesting. Keep it up! Also, if your looking for other stories to read, you should check out the Arceus Assassin by DarkWolfAssassin. You can find him under my favorite authors.

you should try puting him in the world of naruto it might be funny

i like how you have this but when he talks to pokemon shouldent they freak-out

one more thing did he show his ture form to the girls

kill all leave nobody

This is a good chapter, but errors are still present with capitalization and spelling.

With the ending A/N, where are you with the fall break? I looked at your profile and saw that you in the U.S., pertaining to country, and it's near the end of winter, not fall. I just wanted to clear that up, kind of an OCD thing to me. I'll participate in the poll you have an your profile page as well. I'm sorry if I'm being too much of an English critic, I'll try and stop it so you don't get peeved at me for it. This is a great story and hope to see more.

Anyways, Semper Fi - The Constitutionalist -

Good chapter, but still need to fix some things. Capitalization, spelling, grammar, and punctuation are still issues. You also used the wrong tense of a word, that being 'backed' at least twice. I don't mean to criticize about it, but at some point, you could come back and revise the chapters already published. I also forgot to mention in my last review that you could Bolden the beginning and ending A/N to differentiate them from the story.

Anyways, this is a good story so far. I like it and may favorite the story.

Semper Fi - The Constitutionalist -

This is an interesting opening chapter, although there is a problem with your spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and grammar. You also type 'I' in lowercase, which is incorrect, using the letter 'I' by itself should always be capitalized, it's common English.

Spelling/Capitalization error Example: "it was here, right here! The massive distortiong reading!" (Fix to)- "It was here, right here! The massive distortion reading!"

Grammar error Example: "Dr. Clair, make a room for this guy right here, he got nowhere to sleep for a couple days" professor juniper said to the receptionist. (Fix to)- "Dr. Clair, could you give a room to this young man here, he has nowhere to stay, he can stay for a few days.

Punctuation error Examples: Id - I'd (I would); "nope, i got nothing not even food or water, i have to stock up soon" i said. - "Nope, I've got nothing, not even food nor water, I'll have to stock up soon." I said.

The opening paragraph was very strange with how Dante came to the Pokémon world and it raises questions. Where did Dante come from? How did he create a portal? What sort of powers does he have? Explaining what the powers he has when he uses them are, if any, like the portal opening, could help further character development.

Anyways, I hope to see you excel with this story. I also read your other story and posted a review. This is a story I will follow and may even mark as a Favorite as I read the next few chapters.

Semper Fi - The Constitutionalist -

yo r u going to finish this fic please tell me tha do like it i will continue to look every day 4 a new 1 k so please hurry.