Reviews for Crumbling Promises
blackroseslover chapter 1 . 2/15/2017
The ending isent good.
BlackKiryuu chapter 1 . 4/12/2015
That was great. Just like I imagone Sasuke and Naruto in my dreams. You have literally read my mind. Amazing.
Washawana chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
This clearly needs more chapters! lol jk love it! 3 3
nailej chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
hey so i like this story, i like how you gave naruto the "dominant" role in their relationship even though sasuke is the seme. . its really rare to find that sort of story plot where naruto controls the relationship and it was also a bonus that both off them have their families. .i really like it, it widens the concept of the story line. .SOOOOO i was thinking that maybe you could make a SASUNARU version of the movie ONE MORE CHANCE... im a reallybig fan of that movie and id like to see sasuke as popoy and naruto as basha. hope u'll consider it,. really looking forward to how you'll rearrage the characters and scenes to match it with the SASUNARU concept,. ,i mean i'd do it myself but i wouldnt wanna stain such master piece,. .. i mean seriously, alot of lady readers out there is so gonna realte to their story,,and i really feel like sasuke suits best for the role of popoi, and naruto as basha cause in the movie , basha only decided to pursue architecture cause popoi was sortta controlling her.. . .any ways please please please consider my request,., its gotta be you, i just know it... after reading your materials and how detailed things are, i put my trust in you.. .thankyouthankyouthankyou.. good luck ja ne..
andysanime chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Good job on this story but... geez can't you guys let the two have /some/ kind of privacy? XD
andReiki chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Awesome! I always had a knack for possessive Sasuke...
yaoihime22 chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
I love it. The ending was funny and witty i would loved to read a lemon. In the ending though. Hope to read more of your stories.
narutolover15 chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Oh my! I cried! This was an excellent story!
PurpleIceCream chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Itachi: Stop it father. I can almost feel innocence slipping away.
Me/Uchiha Family/Namikaze-Uzumaki: What innocence?!
xD Haha. He's not so innocent at all.

/ Matt
Kyotaroro chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Reading this story, I was amused the while time. Till the very end. And then, I bursted out laughing! Totally LOVE the story! So cute, yet sad, funny, the last part... Yup, that my fav. part!
babydoll45 chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
LOVED IT! KYAAAAAA
Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
love it
666snoopy chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Awesome story, I loved reading it.
MOWSIES chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Cute! Love this! Short and simple! :)
HTEB1992 chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
love the storry i hope there will be more
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