What ever happened to the airbenders that Hiruzen helped defend from sozin’s army?

Please update !

I love this story please update this as soon as possible

I would've loved it if you made Naruto a loser.

Please update soon really great story!

One room of improvement; your periods and commas... But overall? Awesome!

I don't know who you are, whether you are still alive or whether you and I would both be alive to make the establishment of a very similar scene created by a very creative and innovative creature that you are, be published in my future anime, your scene brought light to the fact that in war only the victor is rightat the same time the victor may not want to be right, giving your reasons for certain actions in this scene lives Littleto be questioned, imagine a situation where two generals exists one snapping the sanity of the other unfortunately resulting to the destruction of the other's home you my friend have just portrayed that and with the best of effects, no one is right or wrong but if I was to decide yizhu's move was underhanded and callous because if it was him he would have found the strength to equally do the same if the roles where reverse this is just perfect to me.

Awesome story, I hope to see more soon, when's the next chapter going up?

Vnbi

Cool. Can't wait to see what happens next.

its was a good pick up from where you left the ONLY thing I think you need is Naruto havinga spedial ability other than what kuram gives him maybe something like red or black lighting whatever you decide I think it will be fun to read. Pleas update soon

Okay...time for some good and some bad.

I shall start with the bad, and rip this bandage off really quick:

Four years of writing this story, and your grammar remains consistently horrid. You did not capitalize certain words that are supposed to be proper nouns (i.e. Water Tribe), and sometimes, you capitalize things that don't need it (i.e. "We need an army Aang"). You also don't seem to know when to use your punctuation marks (i.e. Did they even know he was alive?). How you got 227 reviews in 12 chapters, when you have grammar this bad is beyond me.

Also, make sure you know how to spell names properly before writing this. Choji's clan is 'Akimichi' not 'Akamichi'.

Now for the some good (and at the same time suggestions to fix this):

Story-wise, it sounds like you're trying to overly-bash the other Elemental Nations by having them gang up on the Lightning Empire. Even the Avatars seem to be in arms against them for no reason other than for the sake of 'balance.' It's original, I'll give you that...but as much as I like VFSNAKE and his writings, he bashes too much. I'm not telling to stop with the bashing, just try to limit the bashing if at all possible so that it doesn't become a complete bash fic.

Overall, in order to fix this story, you desperately need a beta-reader to help you iron out any flaws that you have in your story. Not only that, but it'll give you someone to help bounce ideas off of. Connect with someone on Google Docs, send someone your DocX file; one way or another, try to make this a team effort so that instead of sending us what is a rather rough work, it will be polished good and proper.

Now this is a worthy chapter. Kurama putting them in their place.

So Garra is coaching Naruto and trying to help him be a better leader? Cool.

Continue with main story
More please