YOU ARE SO MEAN! HOW DARE YOU NOT UPDATE
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And the updating stopes because?

well, shit. thats not good for Fang or Nudge or anyone! I really thought Eizen might be some kind of help

there is seriously no words to describe how cruel this is to Fang and Nudge. Their names being just numbers i mean ouch. and the water... im hating the School more and more, if thats possible

like the quote at the end and i was pretty annoyed to find out that the Director was still one step ahead of EVERYONE!. gawd, you have succeeded in the 'make sure the readers hate the new bad guy'

oh sht. this is not good news for max and everyone. can Angel feel other peoples feelings now?

*sudder* poor Fang and Nudge! Far out im so angry now!

so i was kinda right with the whole Hitler thing? ish. this Director seems like a huge &% $.

so the new Director is hand of like Hitler? Only the fair skinned, blue eyed and blond haired are allowed to live? That is coooooold. Its a very good plot line though . Imma stick around, see where it goes

This is really good keep updating

please continue...

This is really good I love it )

This is really nice like how the usual ppl aren't the main focuse its something different

Hi, Awesome story. I am also writing a story on Maximum Ride but i have writers block please help me, its called "When will we escape" please help me. I really do like your story. Thanks.

Please have angel tell fang& nudge what 2 do and have them be resisted to the drug. o and blow some earasers up!'