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Sexy, sweet, and funny. Perfectly in-character. :) I love these two! Great writing!

Amazing!

This is probably the hottest story ever! And it is well-written! What a rare thing for an erotic fanfiction!

And that's how it *should* go, b/c sparring is hot. :)

Great story...entertaining and hot as hell! Wouldn't expect any less from you!x

Superb story and very hot

Bravo
French fan

I absolutely beyond loved this. Every single thing about it was great.

OMG...HOTT!

Loved it. :D

Holy crap this was super hot! Nice! Max and Alec are amazing together and logan is an annoying little dick.

Loved everything about this story!

Good story. I especially liked your description of the first fight in the training room. Great job. Hopefully, Friday for week of the cat won't be too hard to finish up. :)

So happy to see some new DA fic from you!

This was really enjoyable. I especially liked the small moments of humour combined with the sexual tension. I also loved the use of her feelings about verbs to carry the plot forward. My only critical comment is that I initially found the flow of the story somewhat confusing and it took a couple of read throughs for me to clarify the plot in terms of when and where action was occurring. In part this may be because I am reading on a tablet though. :)

Loved it! I enjoyed how you carried the verb theme throughout, how you kept Logan in the dark and then got rid of him. I fully enjoyed how you almost stream-of-consciousness described the whole scenario and created a parallel between the two sparring sessions. Very enjoyable :)