I love it so cute!mgreat job:):)

Fluffy! Lovely. :D

Aww... So sweet. :3

Thank you! Someone agrees what she was gonna say at the end of the song! I think you should continue this, give them a little turmoil or just them exposing their relationship

Awww! So cute! Way better than what actually happened inthe real episode of "What was missing"

Love the story and to me its a great explanation to what happen to them in the past.
I also like that Marceline was going tell Bonnie that she wanted to kiss her in the song OwO

Pretty good. Nice ending :)

Oh, how I loved this story! Thanks you so much for writing it! D

"Maybe I shouldn't have spit on Bonnibel."

She shouldn't have done that. I'm so happy in that fanfic I made, Alex, Marceline got owned by her own spit.