You know, I can’t believe I haven’t read this fic until now. It’s a shame, because it’s pretty cute! The only issue being spelling and grammar mistakes, and the dialogue in chapters 1, 2, 3 and 4 being really clumped together.

In fact, the layout was the whole reason I didn’t read it before. Which, again, is a shame, because the fic’s actually rather cute, now that I read it.

Poor Buneary. Not only was Pikachu struggling with the idea of leaving Ash to settle down with her, he wasn’t even sure if he liked her that way! That boy’s mind is a confused mess. XD Did he like or not? Even he didn’t know!

Well, he knows now, I guess. Though he still seems to be avoiding the topic out of... awkwardness? Embarrassment? Maybe both?

I loved the idea of Pikachu and Buneary building a snowman, making snow angels, having a snowball fight and building a snow fort, just between the two of them. It sounded really cute, and I kind of wish I’d been able to see more of it. XP

Gosh darn cliffhanger! Who was screaming and why?! Will we ever find out?! DX

If you’re still active, I hope to see this fic updated! I promise to review again, if you do!

ravengal out x

FINISH THIS STORY MAN AND IT NEEDS TO BE A LONG CHAPTER (sorry i jst got invested son much in this i forgot my sense of humanity)

You already know what buneary planned fore pika BOI

please. finish. eeeeettt.

this story would have been good if it wasn't for the fact you cliffhanger bull crap the entire story I mean I'm ok with cliffhangers I don't care science I personally wait and usually I just wait for it to finish and then I read it but cliffhanger the entire thing I have friends and they all call you an a**hole for doing that so,congratulations I hope your proud of your self JERK

ASDF I like trains

You may be eating a cookie instead of updating. All I have to say is...

"PUT THAT COOKIE DOWN, NOW!"
-Arnold Schwarzenegger, Jingle All The Way

Huh? Didn't realize this updated. Ah well, I'm not going to be like "OMG it's alive!" because that'd be kind of hypocritical of me. XD

Well regardless this chapter was pretty cute!

And Pachirisu...just Pachirisu! XD

Good job and keep on keepin' on!

JUST DO IT! YESTERDAY YOU SAID TOMORROW SO JUST DO IT!
-Shia LaBeouf, 2015

Good story

I did just post the other comment, I just forgot to sign in first.

Yay, you're back! I was starting to lose hope. Another great chapter, keep up the good work! :)

Hi! This seems like a really cute story! It's a little hard to read though- using paragraph breaks would make it much easier to read! Whenever a new person speaks, or a new idea is introduced, there should be a new paragraph :)

The grammar and spelling could also use some work! But I think you have good ideas, and you keep characters true to canon, and give them fun personalities!

Listen I read your stories and I just have to say I loved them so much. I want a sixth and seventh part which in part seven or at the end of part six pikachu confesses his love towards buneary please and don't stop there also make another part where there is a blizzard which lets ash and pikachu stay for another 3 weeks. Please don't stop making these you can write and I hope to see more in the near future.

it was good