I love that Kari realised what a brat she is. Kinda hypocritical but ever since 'Home Away From Home' I've hated her.

I wanna see Kari become corrupted

So I heard Ben Myatt got in this this fight with Dakari King Mykan, I thought people were joking! I've read this fic, and while I agree it is neat, it isn't truly right to leave it unfinished, and I read Dakari King Mykan's version also; it's actually not that bad. But still, I think the both of you are being complete total assholes. Ben Myatt, you should quit being so harsh on other people. So you're a real author now; that doesn't mean much, and it certainly doesn't give you the right to look down on people and act however you see fit. And Dakari King Mykan, your attitude is no better; picking fights with people who upset you. As understandable as it is and no matter how much you may want to, it's not the right course of action and only leads to bigger problems, like this petty fight you've both got going on now. You both should apologize to one-another, if not, fine, but I will say this...

Dakari King Mykan, quit whining all the time and grow up!

Ben Myatt, you piss off and adjust your attitude, Mister! You're not making things any better.

Much as I like this fic, I'd like it better if it were actually finished. Ben Myatt and Dakari-King Mykan; grow up and stop acting like babies throwing tantrums!

Yes, if you want to read a crappy rehash by a talentless hack that somehow manages to make this fic worse than it already was, go and read Mykan's version. Somehow, he manages to make it even more whining, self serving and obnoxious than even my 17-year old emo self could!

Objectivity. It's a wonderful thing.

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I took the liberty of TAKING the fic, revising it, and FINISHING it once-and-for-all Myself.

Ben Myatt and I got into a little fight (He was being very rude) He told me he not only does not WISH to finish the fic and keep it that way, but people should move on and let it die. He even joined a mocking website where he mocks even his own writing. (I expressed my disappointment to him and he continued to be rude. I decided to do this to punish him, and the Daikari Writers Union.

When you start something... YOU FINISH IT!

Just came back from a dramatic reading of your story... along with an ending the people who did the dramatic reading had done... and even though I'm disappointed that this story ended on a cliffhanger (seriously, you never gave us an ending), I like Again A Fanfic Critic's version of the ending... I mean, come on, Shatora being the Spirit of Drugs, Davis finally accepting that TK and Kari are together in the end, Etemon being the true bad guy, even Gray getting his own heartwarming moment at the end... and did I mention DIGI CHRISTMAS!

Just so you know, I doubt you'll go back to this, but just so you know, the ending that Again A Fanfic Critic did is the true ending as far as I am concerned!

You should put more chapters in this. It could be even better if you did. So do it for your fans man.

great story, ill amit when i first stumbled acrossed it, i thought it would be crap, but its REALLY good, and shame on you, denying your readers chapter 8 for 7 years

Davis should go out with Shatora, so this way Kari will feel even more depressed. Go Daitora (DavisxShatora)!

You guys really should continue this it's really good

Good story, but when does the next chapter arrive? I am awaiting anxiously.

This is a great story so far and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Boy...

I know how Davis feels, It's like he lost all his friends,

Or he is his only friend.

Oh, Poor Davis...I wish I could help him

Interesting Story. Interesting set up too. Each author takes a certain chapter. Nice idea. But whose got the next chapter cuz I want to continue to read. :D