this is a really great story you really should make another part of this story because it needs more of an ending. other than that it is a great story.

Sorry that I just reviewed now.
Sooo glad that you made Neal getting the medicine.
I was so sure that I would read about his death in later chapter, since I thought Mozzie didn't have the treasure anymore. But i guess he kept some, right?
I hope Neal and Moz got the chance to be friends again. I love those two, the relationship the have.

I can't really express how beautiful this was. While critiquing wise, there could have been some more details here and there, perhaps more writing describing certain things vs just stating them, but like you knocked this out of the park. You meshed it into the timeline perfectly and it worked. Sometimes writers try to do that, or just create an entirely new timeline, but you managed to stick to the timeline in the TV show, but alter it just enough to make it work and be believable. Furthermore, you just made me soooo sad, I was crying a bit here and there. I mean dang, the whole time I could feel the anguish, the regret, the pain. I was getting to be almost sure Neal was going to die, but those last few chapters, I started having hope and my emotions went on a rollercoaster ride, not the kiddie kind - the kind you have to be a certain age and height to even consider it and even the adults are scared to death. I want to say so much more, but I am tired since I had to stay up a few more hours to finish the story to see what happened. I can't express how much I love this story, even if it makes me feel sad. Your medical stuff wasn't perfect, but it was just vague enough to work. As a medical professional it drives me insane when people start getting specific but clearly, they have no idea what they are talking about. I like how you elaborated on medical things but focused more on the story - which is more important than some medical jargon. Just, you really knocked it out of the park and did a great job. Don't even know if you will get this since it is so many years later, but maybe you will. Someone read your awesome story like at least 4 yrs after you wrote it! So thank you for your hard work.

Heartbreaking at points. The long hospital vigil was difficult. Peter shutting Neal out because he didn't trust Neal was also painful. Neal tried to be the better person and confessed to stealing the treasure to protect Mozzie. While Mozzie had a secret of his own.

Clever twists throughout. I liked the characters. I liked your enthusiasm for your beta. That was lovely too. Thanks for writing.

I've read this twice already and i'm reading it again. It's probably my favorite piece of fan fiction I've read.

Amazing work! 3
I love your story... keep up the good work! :p

Amazing story.

One of the BEST stories I ever read on Fanfiction dot freakin net!

Frankly speaking, I never watched a single episode of White Collar. I'm a Supernatural fan and read no fanfiction but that.

I stopped by your story by accident, was looking for a good TV series Hurt/Comfort fanfiction and somehow you stood out. I actually had to Google the series so I'd know how Neal and the rest of the characters look like!

Now after reading your amazing story, I can't wait to get my hands on this show! I think Supernatural's gonna face some harsh competition!

Apart from all of that, seriously, your story was so well written I kept forgetting this was a fanfiction! You had me glued to my chair for the last 3 hours! I couldn't stop reading! Your plot is just so perfectly well built and written I... I'm just speechless over here. I'm always for a hurt!Dean, but I gotta say that a hurt!Neal is just as good! Can't believe I just said that...

Thank you so much for sharing! And thank you for making Neal live!

Oh noooooooo!

Please write some more. Really enjoyed this

Idon't like stories that kill off Neal but this one was very moving

Yes please give a tag. Really enjoy your storywriting

This was amazing. Not only the chapter but the entire story. I love the ending and i love Sara and Neal. You did a great job with this story i hope to read another from you soon.

Ooooh, this was nice. Very nice. Warm and fuzzy nice.
Tags would be nice too.

I'm gonna have to reread it one of these days to remember everything;). Still, I think it went well and I am glad to have seen it through.