Me encantó esta historia y la forma en que la planteaste fue muy buena

Wow. thank you for making this luv, it was amazing!

thank you for creating this!

This was incredible
3

Daym I'm shooketh
Poor hiruma
Sena gonna be hella mad tho

That ending thoooo
Yes yes yes yes

Wow that left me shook

Aww this chapter was so good

This was so gorgeous. I was a little cautious at the beginning because while it looked like a cool idea I've been burned before but this really and truly delivered. You had an amazing idea and executed it fantastically. Two thumbs up and this fic is immediately going on my favourites list.
Also I loved that you put this in Hiruma's perspective because I don't think any thing else would have done this the justice that it deserved. Also the way you wrote Hiruma's voice was just gorgeous, the sarcasm and totally done with this bullshit in relation to his teammates was genius.
All told I really enjoyed this story and am super thankful that you wrote it.

I've read this story several times since it was first being published on here and I love it just as much now as I did then
Fantastic work!

Idk, it bugs me how Hiruma makes Sena sound so stupid, when he's not..

i still dont see why exactly hes so determined to unleash Sea's inner demons.. it just doest seem like a good idea

fuck, that was amazing. Thank you for everything

I loved this so much and can't believe it's finally over. This is probably my favorite Eyesheild 21 story in the whole archive. I loved the writing style and how it sucked me into the story.

I loved this so much and can't believe it's finally over. This is probably my favorite Eyesheild 21 story in the whole archive. I loved the writing style and how it sucked me into the story.