This was very goo. Im intrigued. Ryan seems harmless enough... until he mixed with walker... dang...

I would warn you of seemingly choppy sentances, jus a tip

I really liked this though! Promise

That's a good question, will they work on Danny?

Nice Story! I really like how you introduced your character Sollertis. I've got a pretty good idea who he is after this first chapter and I'm curious what will happen with him and his invention and of course with Danny. I also think your explanation of the concept of the handcuffs is very believable and I loved the comparison with the production of vaccine! :)
Please keep up the good work and update soon! I really wanna know what's going to happen!

I love it. I simply love and adore it. I'm so caught in this story!

Yet, whether it's me being retarded, you seem to have some trouble with the time. (past sence) If you want me to, I'll be happy to help you. I really will. Just know that I'm in a school with 2 hours of homework each day, so I might be slow sometimes.