All in all, I'm not fond of hologram stories but this is incredible. The very first chapter was captivating and exciting and your writing style is just so enjoyable!

omg that was awsome .! i'm alredy exited to read the next chapter .!

This story is awesome please please please update soon.

I gotta admit, that 'pork swords' comment made me laugh, because that is exactly how Knock-Out would react. Still, it amazes me how fans immediately label all male characters as gay, but here, you've made Knock-Out that vain prick who's flamboyant, but not a fag. I thank you for that. He is so deliciously in character and your OC is interesting as well.

Do continue, my dear.

awesome chapter always anyways i like to see more of those two getting along more or funny moments 3

I love this story so much ! :D

Love. Love. LOVE THIS STORY! Please continue, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oooo knockouts gonna race them! Also I hate to admit it but I can't wait until they get to do medical stuff! Wait, is knockout going to teach her EVERYTHING about cybertronion anatomy? *snickers* poor girl XD

Hey! I'm so happy to see you! And you brought an update, how thoughtful! It's exactly what I wanted!

Avery and Knock Out are wonderfully uncomfortable with each other in this chapter, it makes me laugh. The bit with the bra is particularly funny.

And can I just say how happy I am that Avery isn't a traumatized orphan like so many other OC's in fanfic? Its very refreshing.

I'm glad you went further into detail on Megatron's reasons for keeping a human around, it must seem like a crazy decision to everyone on the ship! He must be so frustrated with his medic.

And Knock Out at the end of this chapter, I just want to slap him upside the head! He doesn't have time to race, he's due back on the ship! Megatron's gonna be maaaaaaadddd. . .

Now I'm going to slink back to my lurker shadows and patiently wait for an update.

I happen to like Gun's and Roses! I'm currently listening to them and what's weirder still is Welcome to the Jungle had just finished when I started reading this chapter! :D

I found it hilarious btw. Nice touch with the bra! XD

And to end it off...of course..Knock-Out can't resist a good race!
...in thirty he said...right when the sun sets too...this is not going to end well back with Ol' Megz... XD

Totally looking forward to the next chap!

This is beautiful, the characters are wonderfully in character and I really suck at giving reviews. You're doing great, don't listen to that little editor inside of your head. Keep going, I love this.

I love this story!
Its just awesome! You kept everyone in character too, not many people can do that.
I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Good luck XD

Hiiii! I'm the Guest from last time. Meant to put my name, but I forgot. Oopsie!
Now then.
*tackle*
Eeeeeeee! YOU FINALLY UPDATED! :DDD happyhappy
Okay, so this was a great chapter. You always apologize for people being out of character, but I think they work quite nicely! Especially Knock Out. He's so darn sassy! I love the way you write him. And Avery continues to be awesome.
I don't think I found any grammatical or punctuation errors, either. Which makes me very happy! X3
I can't wait to see what Knock Out does in the race. Keep it up, KM! *thumbs up*

This should be interesting...

Love it so much! Can't wait for the next up date.