Cool. This. Is. So. Cool! But I'm so sad when I saw the last date this story updated. Please do update more. I wanna see swepru more! Ah. And it's indeed not allowed to write explicit sex in ffn, but I think you can write it in the other site. Give us the link and readers will gladly read the smut action.

That escalated fast.. no, I mean FAST... wow... also Berwald seems ooc... fairly so too... hm...

THIS STORY.
i lurvs it.
there's just so. much. sexual tension! each chapter keeps me hooked! but if you could, get someone else to write the yaoi for you. from your little notey thingy, it seems like you aren't comfortable with that kind of stuff, but it would really add to this. and besides, everyone joins the dark side of fanfic eventually, da? J pleez continue!

cannot say anything about the chapter, same exact reaction from the last time. i must ask why the title is like that? i am asking this because a.) i want to know how to make a title, although i dont write b.) because i cant think of something at the moment why you have chosen the title.

all in all, i like your writing. also, i want to be your brain's buddy. it is decent. but you have not updated for a long time, is this abandoned? -disappointed- i hope it is not. you are our only hope, right now, about this pairing. you have created a good situation for the two.

ps. i apologize for my bad english and lack of vocabulary. i do not usually use english and express myself. goodluck and please update, christmas.

thank goodness you did not write the sex scene. good to maintain the light feeling about this fic. -sips coffee- must give you a virtual coffee for this. -gives coffee-

may i ask if he did exactly what he said? bout opening... the bloody part? lucky me. hope he's often like that.

how prussia could walk in birthday suit like that shamelessly is beyond my comprehension, although my mind tells me to shut up... he is awesome like that. funny so far... glad somebody recommended this. -sigh- at least it is not sex here, sex there.

thought they would have a shooting contest. anyway, how's college? last time i checked it myself, it was plain annoying for a lazy arse like me.

promising, i must say. hope it will stay good until the end.

Okay. The urge to become a fangirl. Berwald could wink? Holyshit. Fun sexy times, oyeah.

Guess you've been busy on school. But I hope you could update, but please do not rush it. Meaning, do not fast forward the scenes please, I want more sexy times. And violent Berwald & Gilbo with guns would be nice. And then, Gilbo would be a mother and Sweden would be a father. Goddamn, I want them to adoooopt me! And watch them make out!

UPDATE, PLEASE. And also, hope you could write more about these two, not just one shot. Also, Lars and Gilbo would be sweet too.

Bullshit. The sexy part's gone, just learning that Berwald could smirk and be seductive almost killed me. Ohshit, can't remove the mental image. Gotta say this is my favorite chapter of your work. I really don't understand why this isn't famous. This deserves more reviews!

Love the violent and ruthless Gilbert, but unfortunately... it's very rare. My favorite character, guns, plus gore would be perfect.

*sigh* Gilbert, what did you do? You're suppose to hide your family when you're involve in something like that (in my POV), now... if only you'd tell Luddy, then he could also watch out.

Good but very short.

Poor Berwald, that's pretty difficult situation.

I also think Gilbert would retain his soldier traits esp in business matters.

I wish it's more descriptive, but you've said this was your first, da?
And I don't really think fighting scene's easy to write.

I like how Sweden pay attention to Gilbert. You know how sweet it was, do you? Haha. Still short chapter though, I hope you'll make it longer. Keep it up.

And goodluck to your college life, I know it's a bitch. Really, especially when it's more on mathematics and sciences. Geez.