Excellent writing thank you for the time and effort you’ve put into these fics

It'd be cool to see the femmes reaction to working with nest. I'd liked to see what would happen, it would be fun to see those 5 ladies against lennox and his men. Nice one on another little side story it fits with the universe quite well.

It would be funny if Prowl crashes at the end of the chapter.

Such a wonderful, little fic! I laughed so hard when Prowl glitched!

Thank you for writing!

Please updateeee

I kind of wish to read another of these exercises involving Jazz, Bee, and the Arcee triplets (and maybe some others). I know technically Jazz is dead in the movies, but he's spec ops too. It seems his never underestimate an opponent training would come in handy. In any case, at least I'm pretty sure the flag wouldn't end up in the same place again.

Another one?! A sequel?! I did not know that! Omg! This is splendid! Fantastic!

Prowl,Bluestreak,Hound and Mirage... Tsk tsk tsk! Shame on you 4! Especially you both Prowl and Mirage! You all underestimate the awesome Humans!

Mirage your an ass! Good thing you are out first! Though I honesty thought Blue will go down first cause of his fear on hurting Humans. But Mirage... Does make sense cause of his attitude and view us as under foot, burden and so forth. He had it coming and he deserve it! And your invisibility cloaking doesn't work in the rain. Bluestreak is next to be taking out but is glad he is still be friends with the humans. 3rd is Hound... Sorry dude your holos doesn't work well. Not in the rain either. Last... Prowl... Oh boy you deserve that one to. With that attitude and almost broke that trust with the humans. Though I feel bad about his cpu crash down... But that's what he gets!

Now they see that us Humans are a force to be reckon with! Not mess with! We are so good that we do adapt,our small size and learn so quick is our great advantage! The cons will never understand that. We may be small and organic... In spirit we are strong! But despite the different species... We help eachother,respect eachother. Never leave anyone or not behind... Brothers and sisters in arms.

I read all 5 chapters and it's so freakin great! This chapter is funny to!

I'm so sorry for your loss.

This was a beatiful and amazing ending. :)

Lol. They're really not so different. And yes, they're just as bad as we are. XD

So awesome! Awww. :3

I just found this fic and its prequel and loved them to bits! I can't wait for the sequel if you ever plan on making it XD.

Anon because I'm too lazy to log in right now...

This has been a really amusing look at the Autobots getting settled in on Earth. And I saw on your profile that there's another forthcoming. I look forward to it.

Now far be it for me to tell another writer what to write, but it does occur to me that Autobots (and Decepticons) are rather adaptable as well. It's amusing to watch the mechs' preconceptions about fragile organic life forms get handed to them on a pink platter, but the humans have also been depending on those preconceptions thus far. A second training exercise against the same mechs wouldn't be so simple - Mirage'd remember to watch his footing, Sideswipe, Jolt and Ironhide would be more focused, Prowl's tactics would be better fitted to combating humans rather than Decepticons, *none* of them would be so easily led into traps, etc…

Something to think about.

Dragon of Despair

Very good!:D

What a delightful read! Everyone seemed to be in character and it's nice to read something about humans being competent for once, heh. Are you still planning on writing the next part?

LOL! I was reading this chapter in bed during a fit of insomnia, and actually woke up my husband (who sleeps like a log) by laughing so much!
This was a great tribute to your brother-in-law.

Yay! Prowl in the paintball war! I just knew he would glitch when he realized that tiny organic lifeforms were defeating proud Autobot soldiers!
I love Prowler!