This is exactly the story I've been looking for,here on 's really amazing,you are a very talented writer.

Wow what an intense story and I thought you did a good job. Thanks for writing.

I love this story. I can't explain why but it's absolutely wonderful.

Ok. So this was flippin' intense! The images you created were breathtaking and I love this pairing! Great job :D

wow, i can't wait until the next chapter comes up. i can now feel tears welling up in my eyes, obscuring my vision, so I'd better write this quickly. The common use of the word chaos is quite interesting- it's always been a favorite concet of mine, and the way in which you use it is quite splendid. This is a very good story! And you have a fabulous way with words, metaphors, and the human psyche.

*starts clapping like a maniac* Oh that was so beautifull, you work really is athing of beauty! I do hope you update soon!
gothic_neelam
P.S I have to say the last line was fitting! It made me smile. _

Beautifully done story, the narration parts were so lyrical and intellectual and deep. Tom seems very seductive . The themes in it were greatly incorporated, as were the references to the house stereotypes. And of course the last line was very effective - Minerva's efforts were in vain.
It's truly amazing how you managed to make Tom cry without making him appear weak in the slightest. He’s still very Slytherin and his response to Minerva’s reply ‘Good answer’ was amazingly fitting.
I believe in the AN you said you'd have more parts.. please do. There isn't enough MM/TR fics out there, actually there aren't in fact enough gen TR fics.
Brilliant fic.
-paradox

Very nice writing!

A friend suggested I try some M/T, and I'm glad I did. This was great once I got into it, although the the style jarred a bit to start.

Anyways, I especially enjoyed the comments about being Sorted and chaos in general... The repetition of words got across your point well.

All in all - very capitvating, and I'm glad I read it.

Wow, that was the first T/M fic I've read and it was very good! I certainly hope you write more!

Absolutly brilliant.

I can't begin to express my feelings after I've read your most wonderful story.

And even when if I try it can only be shallow remarks compared to the beauty of your own words.

I long for more.

Please; give a sequel.

Wow. I've been looking for some good Tom/Minerva fics, and I've got to say that this is one of the best I've read. I love how you portray the characters! They were perfect!

I loved how Minerva was shocked when Tom turned the tables, and I loved how Tom turned them.

I love the last line, too. It's powerful.

Okay, that wasn't the only line I loved; I loved them all.

I think I'll stop saying how much I loved this fic; I fear that if I continue, I'll be typing this one review for an hour!

I loved the way you mingled emotions with actions! Her thoughts of chaos mingled with the whole story well. The last lines were especially fitting. It's a great one-shot! Mmhmm, shall stop rambling now.

Goodness. What an awesome story. Unusual pairing, but it fits. Great work!

One word to sum it all-

Brilliance.

"And how did he know that her favourite sin was tears?"

You're writing is very beautiful. I love how deep and poignant it is. It is a little hard to get into, but once you do, it flows and presents you with some beautiful images. Cheers:)