Lovely work!

I enjoyed reading this greatly. The idea was excellent and you persecuted it amazingly well.
You done good.

xoxo.-G

That was perfect, absolutely perfect. I'm speechless right now... which is not a norm for me. Wow... just wow. I... wow.

I'll shut my mouth now, in order to prevent further embarrassment.

I Love it write more pleasssssssse!

I love the way you've written this, very much! Excellent feel to the whole thing, and delicious phrases. Please continue!

this was really short, but sweet and extremely well done story. great job!

loved this!

I think its cool

I love it! ! !
Do you think you could make another
chapter/ Sequel thingy?
But in Dereks POV? I think it would be really cool! xD

AWW! I love it! It's different than all the other stories i have read and that's what makes it great! Keep writing because you have talent!

loved it.

This has the perfect balance of dialogue and narrating; not too less, not too much of either, you know? And it's really creative and cute. I usually don't like fanfics with the one-theme thing but you did it really well.

Amazing