| Reviews for Proof of Existence |
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Anon chapter 33 . 7/6/2019 Beautiful story |
AquaEclipse chapter 21 . 8/28/2018 I am so confused... |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2018 You're one to talk, England, given that no one else is able to see your Flying Mint Bunny and Friends. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2018 I see the summary. I start bawling. |
DaniBerbin chapter 1 . 4/20/2018 ¡Fue una hermosa historia! Hello! 2018 and your story is still a success. A friend and I once, in a roleplay, we had a similar idea about Canada, her death, that only America could see, etc; but we always had doubts about what logical reasons would allow Matthew to be seen again, or more logical explanations about why our cute American was the only one who could see it. Obviously, I'm very happy to find a fic where all those details that give substance to the story are logical and wonderful. Reading this has given me so much satisfaction! Even the attitude of Francis at the beginning, reluctant to anything with England, seems vived in this fic by what happened to his ex-colony. It was gratifying that in the end, resolved that, both tolerate much and even smile with complicity after centuries. At the beginning I was desperate for the duration of the chapters because I felt that many things happened slowly, but then you passed it well and that is a breakthrough as a writer. The narrative style was great and I admit to having cried in some chapters - above all in the range of chapter 21 to 22, I think -. Now, inside the plots, perhaps what I liked the least was Canada's insipid reaction when he learned how he died and who killed him. I think he could show some more emotion, although perhaps that would have depressed his brother. Outside of that, everything else was fantastic. I hope that you are currently writing beyond the fics. I am not American or Canadian, but you made me love even more both nations. ¡Gracias por escribir! Saludos. |
BlacknWhiteBubbles chapter 6 . 3/26/2018 This is sad |
BlacknWhiteBubbles chapter 19 . 3/26/2018 Glad England found out Canada was real |
Decipher the Cipher FMSKHU chapter 2 . 12/28/2017 FINALLY, HE SPEAKS |
Inky-Paws chapter 33 . 10/20/2017 This was a fun story to read! The conclusion was very satisfying, and a good ending to a good story. |
Guest chapter 23 . 8/29/2017 But other countries do have peaces of Canada ? |
Guest chapter 33 . 4/5/2017 3 this is fantastic ahhhhhhhhhh |
FlyingVioletBunny chapter 33 . 10/8/2016 ( )( ) (TT) I love this so bad, but ... ... ... ... ... WHERE IS KUMAJIRO? ( \_/ ) (x)?! |
Guest chapter 33 . 6/26/2016 This was beautifully written! I love how you really focused on the story and developing the characters, which made the story highly interesting and uplifting at the end. |
QYZXV chapter 33 . 5/26/2016 Read your story & loved it; now go write a new one. ;) |
UniverseOfComplexities chapter 25 . 5/25/2016 Gahhhh! So touching. :D |