cool fanfic, like its direction, please continue

I quite like this take on the Negima events. There isn't enough good quality Negima fanfiction that isn't romance or porn (not that those are bad).

How did Negi not know his father's title? He knew his dad was a hero and tried to summon him many times when he was 2-4 so he should have known the title since the Demon Attack has already happened.

How does one enter Heaven from Mars? Elysian is the Greek Heaven...one of them anyway.

On the lack of influence on Negi in canon it matters if you follow the nature or nurture argument. Also As a genius Negi had skipped years of development meaning Kamo's influence would have been lessoned. He graduated with a Double Major at age 9 and thta was with combining two sets of public schools. so estimated 32 years of schooling...done in 4-5 years. Saying Negi is a Genius or Prodigy is like claiming Humans can think. So obvious that you should be slapped. Negi is a genius that makes the top Geniuses like Tesla, Einstein, and Hawking look retarded. Combined with Nature's aspects of his mother's genes being stronger and the Core of his personality was set; especially with his goal of catching up to his father. Your Ermine Magic is the stuff that would have bored Nagi to death. Not flashy at all. Useful but he couldn't do quarter of what his son did in 4 times the time. Useful cannot even be comprehended by Nagi. Negi could do so however but like I stated before it would have been less influencing with all of the other factors, at least until he passed his test and entered his Journeyman Assignment, if not his Master's Assignment to take the title of Master Mage- Magister Magus.

How did Negi age a year in a couple of months?

Tall green haired girl Chachamaru and Eva? Or Kaede and Zazie?

I have to point out that in Negima to put it into modern terms; people are born with their maxed mp stat. Experience goes to efficiency in casting; not raised MP. The only way to raise it, really doesn't so much as replenishes it at a highly accelerated rate while awake. This method is Magia Erebia, and as far as we know there are only three people in the world who know it and only two who can safely use it. Negi was born with amazing power but Konoka was as well with it possibly being greater than Negi. On a technical aspect your Negi will not quite be as balanced since he both knows the theories of magic better (and with how his mind works that translates to him having more power) but also the fact he has gone to Mundus Magicus so his field experience is months ahead of his canon self. It would likely be equal to post-festival canon Negi.

So Haruna is drawing Harry Potter lol. Negi's characetr design was inspired by HP.

How did Gravity Magic appear in ANCIENT texts only when modernish contemporaries spoke of it? Galileo was 1500s-1600s. Ancient would be Pre-500 AD at the absolute latest. 5-3000 BC would be more acurate.

Do you even have a disclaimer? One said to go to ch5 while ch5 said to go back to 4 lol.

Will Negi learn other elemental magics? With Magia Erebia it would make sense he would not have to worry about the Learning Curve as much since he absorbs magic by breathing and cn bind it to his soul with a little conscious thought.

Hoping it isn't dead!

So, now that's it is a new year, will we get a new update? Or so I hope.. this story is to good to die.

It's good. Though I have yet to see a distinct variation of canon negi and this one. He's a little less Naive yes, and apparently a black market salesman, but it's still negi getting into the same old situations. You must branch out. Or well it's your story. It would be nice to see where a negi that is less naive goes. But anyone find it weird negi and nagi and nekane all have really strange names for BRITISH/WELSH people? Where's Seamus, and Thomas, and Harold, and George, and Henry if these are British people? Did I miss the part where we learn why in the manga?

very fun story.

I like this Negi. He takes less crap from people.

Very good writeing. I really like this concept I hope you get the chance to continue.

Nice, that's all I have to say.

just read this story in one sitting. great stuff and branching from the regular canon, please continue 3

Nice you changed his first pactio. I cant wait for the next chapter.

Will Negi eventually become Evangeline's apprentice and learn Magia Erebea? I hope so. Another great chapter.

I love how a different Negi changes things early on and not just much later.

I love the lexicon. It is another great chapter.

Just read the first 5 chapters. I think this is a great concept and you are pulling it off wonderfully.