yep i was right i love and hate this story not only did you kill narcissa you killed ameila :-( other than that damn what great strory

I love and hate this story love it because its a damn good story hate because you killed narcissa, i love stories where she trains harry or acts as a mother / guardian etc i'm almost afraid to keep reading

I read and finished another story that recommended this one it has been so good to this point and so unique I have read so many stories were the premises Harry Potter very powerful this is the only story where I’ve read Harry Potter very weak and somehow you make it work

Love it to

This story was definitely interesting and original. It was relatively out of standard HP fanfics which makes it worth reading instead of being told the same events as in original book with some minor twists, effectively changing nothing.

Points:
1. Many people died from the start of the story to finish. Some were gruesome.
2. Harry is not a good boy. He has the blood of innocents on his hands too. Some indirect deaths, but direct ones too.
3. He is as manipulative and self-interested as Voldemort and Dumbledore. What sets him apart from them is that most of his life he was on the defensive against both of them, while he just wants to be left alone.
4. There is underage sex, quite frequently
5. Love from the women and hate from men are taken to extremes.

Despite all these points, it was a fun and a great ride full of original plots and not afraid of major changes from the lore. Now let as cheer with this goblet of wine, throw your clothes aside, to Harry, God of clouded mind and debauchery.

I dislike Harry's approach to Sirius, he's an arrogant prick and sending Rita his way is kinda harsh. Sirius and Remus so far did not display any hostility besides some foul mouth.

I would like to see some males in his life who did not hate his guts for a change, but who knows, perhaps he is right and they would change same way as all males and females in his surroundings.

Very good

Love it!

Very interesting. Great fic! Thank you for writing. I love your fics. While there's a ton of sex, it's not graphic, it just is. The stories are so random, I just never know where they're going to go. Thank you so much for writing.

The gobstones games is a hilarious end to the Triwizard Tournament. Thank you.

Wait, Harry's not offering a way for his Slytherin friends to stay out of this? Just warning them to pick a side?

I don't know what it is but I always just want Snape to get married and have children and go be a dad somewhere. I like that his rough edges were filed away by having a child. It sucks that he had to get caught up with Dumbledore's stupid machinations.

I love the beat down (verbal and kick to the nuts) that Nicholas Flammel gave Dumbledore.

Oh, I'm really sad about Amelia. I know she died in canon and Petunia and Narcissa have already died and technically Andromeda is Harry's current guardian but Amelia was a battleaxe and she was a huge support for Harry.

I've realized that all the electives are non-wanded subjects. Taking all the electives is brilliant. Squibs could do that!

good story

Nick Flamel told Harry how to kill Voldermort...use a gun! If Tonks snuck a gun in Harry could of blown his brains out.