Reviews for A Second Journey
reptoholic chapter 8 . 12/20/2019
SOOO MUCH POTENTIAL!
reptoholic chapter 7 . 12/20/2019
I do wonder how he figured out he was the CEO
reptoholic chapter 6 . 12/20/2019
really hope he wings musubi soon
reptoholic chapter 5 . 12/19/2019
why does he give in to her? she did not tell him whos he was, she lies as well
reptoholic chapter 4 . 12/19/2019
go boya gooo
reptoholic chapter 3 . 12/19/2019
lmfao
reptoholic chapter 2 . 12/19/2019
yummy
reptoholic chapter 1 . 12/19/2019
hheheeeehhhh
Lerris chapter 1 . 4/3/2019
There is not much here, just thinly veiled reasons to have Naruto keep adding girls, from what I can tell...
fdms85 chapter 8 . 3/10/2019
por favor continua la histotia esta genial
Nikkless chapter 6 . 2/13/2019
still you are really overrating the power of sekireis.
Nikkless chapter 6 . 2/13/2019
i would say that Karasuba is High jonon level or low level Kage. Miya low to Mid Level kage. And dont really think that karasuba could so easily get by Rasenshuriken it has quite the area effect.
Nikkless chapter 1 . 2/13/2019
hope he can Have Akitsu as an sekirei
Shadow Crimson KyuubiAcnoligia chapter 8 . 11/27/2018
when is the next update
Guest chapter 8 . 4/18/2018
You focused too much on the miya joke and not enough on actually furthering the plot of the story. You also took too much time in certain scenes that should not have taken up an entire chapter. Overall it's an average read and I hope you did/will improve with other stories.
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