I can't get into it. There's too much going on too early.

This is a really messy start.

o7

At least Jealousy (or Katelyn?) deicded to tell Catherine what she wanted :D

"bame drilled inti their skulls."
(?) (into?)

That... Was... Cute! Edward and Catherine dancing? That is a classic moment. Continue updating this incredible story.

I'd honestly be lying if I said that I didn't pull multiple all-nighters just to finish this story, or that I got yelled at multiple times by my trying to finish the story, cuz I'm honestly pretty hooked! The story is PHENOMENAL! I love the way you stayed true to the series but also how you changed the little details here and there!

ps

I SHIP IT!

Best. Chapter. EVER!

I think in the next chapter when Winry go's back to (I think rush valley or Resembool) Luke should kiss her unexpectedly when the train starts to leave. You don't have to use this idea if you don't want to, it's just a suggestion.

Well, since you have/had that real life issue...

...I won't bother you with the grammatical stuff :D

Stay healthy and safe :D

If Cat hasn’t seen Brotherhood, but has seen the 2003 one, then how could she have known that Bradley was Wrath and not Pride

Kinda like the story as well as your OC. But holy damn is this cancerous to read. You should really get a beta.

Well that’s okay i understand I hope she feels better have a great day

Did you noticed when Ed and Cat tell Al Alice And Winry about a way to get Al's body back ?
But how are they going to get Alice's body back when her body didn't even cross the gate it's still at the other side of cat and Alice's world?

So I noticed some parts of.../words/.

If you're referring to two.../two/. Sons without the apostrophe. That is correct. /English-wise/.

And what's baster? Referring Hohenheim to some kind of ethic group?

And /darknress/? What's that?

And oh yeah.

Happy birthday.

A very late happy new year to you too!

How fares your brain currently? I hope it's not that muddled! :P