Please update! Your writing I I good! When you have time,obviously.

Good job weaving in elements from the 2nd IM movie. You are excellent at easing and then raising the tension between them. In this chapter, the line of dialogue that really worked for me was, "Exciting."

I'm really enjoying your story so far. On a technical note, you occasionally lapse into present tense, and it seems odd for an American to say "mum" instead of "mom." But those are less than blips, because you've beautifully swept me into the great, heightened atmosphere of uncertainty, possibility, and sexual attraction between these great characters. The line where Tony says "Or maybe I just like kissing you," felt perfect :-) I'm so glad there's more to read!

looooooooooooooooveeee itttt!

Beautifully written
Thank you

I love this story! It is my favorite fanfiction on Earth! It is written amazingly! ( is that even a word? ) I was so happy when I finished reading it, it was great. I have re-read it many times. Thank you for making this story. And lots of times when I read Tony and Pepper fanfictions, lots of times it doesn't seem like it would never happen. But this seems like it would happen! In shorter words... it was great and I loved it! stars, 10/5!
~ Shadowstar

Nicely done! Great story and well written! I hope there's a sequel that covers their relationship back in CA and his palladium poisoning.

*checks profile for other works* OMG! You have a RoMione fic! (Bookmarked for later reading.) Oooh, NCIS fan! I'm more a Tiva fan but Jenny and Gibbs are cool too. And, ooooh...more Pepperony! (Bookmarked.) Waaaaah! You have a sequel! OMG! You're the best! But wait, it's not complete and it's been years since it's been published and updated. Oh, gosh...I hope you didn't leave it at a major cliffhanger. (Ok... bookmarked for later.)

Please come back! I hope you are still active somehow and receive notifications for the comments you get. I do realize real life takes precedence. Hope all is well and that inspiration for ideas and to write strike soon. Cheers!

Wow. Okay...

1: Bravo to Tony for being a gentleman, and for declaring his concern and love for her to her father and family.

2: I was already worried and nervous for Tony and Pepper with the whole meet the family esp. the older brother and father, but now with the media, government suit and palladium poisoning on top of that, I am even more anxious and worried.

Nice writing, by the way. Hahaha!

Damn. That was a pretty heavy ending. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I love this. I love this so much. You don't even know. I can't get enough Pepperony.

That... was cheesy as all hell, and I loved it! Especially the adorable little kitten at the end.

SOOOOOOO...Adorable! I love this!

I love your Story it's so great. I've been reading it the second time and it's still amazing :)

So sweet ;D

This was my favorite iron man fanfic I only wished it was longer would you ever consider doing a fic that takes place right after this one?