Reviews for Elusive Prey
Eve chapter 20 . 4/24
What happened?
thedaikaijumorph chapter 20 . 9/4/2019
It’s been three years since I first discovered this, and I’m still loving this story. Plus, I love re-reading it to look through and see if there’s any bits I missed the last time, Easter eggs or otherwise.

Love the story, love the characters, love the writing, and I can’t wait to see what’s gonna happen next.

Peace, and May The Gods watch over your Battles, Friend. ;)
Meridia's Son chapter 7 . 8/31/2019
You and I write Lydia extremely different. I write her as an understanding, hyper, kind, and caring, loving Housecarl of a friend who isn't so quick to judge. If I was writing this Lydia would have fixed her noes asked for an explanation, nicely too, and would be concerned. Never in a thousand years would she have pointed a blade at Aela. In the fanfiction I wrote she actually respects Aela greatly and admires her as a strong women, Alea is Lydia's hero, but we all have different tastes and has much as I dislike this version...it sure does spice things up, so good job.

I'm enjoying these chapters, and I noticed that you haven't written in a while, and even though I haven't finished the chapters I still know, I hope you continue writing.
zAnimelover chapter 19 . 2/25/2019
This is a really great story and amazingly written. I really hope you come back to it.
Guest chapter 20 . 2/8/2019
Genuinely one of my favorite fics. Still holding out hope you might finish it someday.
Zahkrii chapter 20 . 1/12/2019
Well, story was ongoing for four years, and not-on-hiatus for another two and a half, so I guess there's no reason to despair quite yet. I wonder if the DB will try to strike with their mark practically around the corner, far from her patron.
CauZ chapter 20 . 12/1/2018
This has been a great story; there's really not much more to it. You're a good writer, and keep your action and emotion balanced within the story. I will admit, it took me a while to warm up to Selene and Aela (I never liked Aela much) but your writing kept me attached. Selena losing her Voice was a little far fetched, because as Dragonborn its in her nature to possess the Voice. However, it's still a cool idea, and I look forward to seeing where you go with it. But, me and many others are still waiting to see! You're skill at writing drew in a lot of readers, don't leave us all hanging! I get it, life can suck, but you said you had a chapter nearly complete. At least post one more time to tell us if you will come back or not. Regardless, great story, and I hope your writing prowess benefits your life.
NormShep chapter 20 . 10/8/2018
It's a very well written story and I really enjoyed
I hope it's not abandoned
noahistrans chapter 20 . 7/12/2018
:(((((( I miss Selene x Aela :((((((
noahistrans chapter 10 . 7/11/2018
Holy LORD, i adore this Fanfic, thank you so much for creating this, Im in love with it!
Wahtiff chapter 15 . 5/1/2018
Geez, you'd think these two would take a chill pill, but then again they're both Nords- they don't know how to chill.
Arkadium chapter 18 . 4/11/2018
getting the dragonborn to lose the "voice" was a bad move .
Guest chapter 20 . 10/11/2017
Damn I loved this story. Really hoping you come back to it at some point
Ericmc020304 chapter 20 . 10/9/2017
you were saying? it been over a year now and no update yet.
Someone You Won't Meet chapter 20 . 7/7/2017
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