that was very well written

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Oh I hope sanji mpreg maybe

ohhh damn! more please? I'm begging you.

I really loved how they mocked and teased each other the complete time and that you showed Zoro's funny side!

Omfgosh. Fucking smexy. I cannot. Thank you for writing such a smexily hot fanfic **

They were... Oddly in character... And it was... Hot.

It's funny 'cause I remembered reading this story, telling myself I had to review it after I regained the blood that I lost, and I never...did.

Whoops.

Funnier thing is that I didn't recognize your name when I found 'Impel Down' and you know the rest from there. It's nice to get a blast from the past now and then. :D

I was my staring could let that happen! If only I could put him in a small room and confront him from there... *rubs chin*

I was going to say something else but I can't remember... It was going to be funny and witty and totally me.

Translation: Crack ass comment on a good one-shot.

I think I'm going to try and read all of your stories because why not? The high from 'Tumblr Fame' is still in my bones and it won't go away.

Great one-shot! :D

Awesome fic! Love the end!

lol i like it! wouldn't mind it being longer but it was def hot! i love uke sanji :D

very sexy...aaaa i want moreee ZoSan! how could u make me drooling here cz the sexiness!
i all your stories, you do too well xD good job and thanks for your supeeer sexy story 3

Call me perverted but I visualized this SO FREAKING VIVIDLY. XD It was awesome "Directionless asshole" is perfect accuracy haha

-"NO YOU DIRECTIONLESS ASSHOLE. THAT'S RIGHT"
PERFECT! Just... absolutely perfect! It had me laughing out loud. I loved it! :D

love it! so hot!

hahaha Zoro getting lost inside Sanji XD I had to try sooo hard to suppress a laugh there ('cause my mom's in the same room and thinks I'm studying... would be weird if I had to explain a sudden outburst of laughter)