It's great carry on

This is great! Hope you'll update it

You should continue. Your word choice is spectacular as well as your grammar and I find the story quite entertaining and witty without changing too much of a person's character. Please continue in this fashion! And may the odds be ever in your favor!
Amelia Doppler

I love it! Please continue!

Please. Continue. Please.

PLEASE CONTINUE!

Yes, definately continue!

Of course to be continued! I want to see what happens next!

Please, please, please keep going!

Please continue! Pleasepleaseplease! I love it!

I would absolutely LOVE for you to continue this! So many ways to take it :o) Hope you will continue soon!

Continue pleeeaaassseee! :)

Very interesting story you write beautifully really looking forward to read more please do continue ! :)

This is really good! Continue, please! You have Selina down well, and I want to see how it resolves.

I really like the way how you write it because you have made the story seems real and in my experience of reading this chapter, there are a few sentences that I had to read twice to understand. I think only 2 sentences, so far, your story is really good, please continue it.
PS: I think, you have to reveal a little about Selina's experience with her mother if she was going to have her baby with Bruce.
PS: If she's really going to have the baby, don't forget to add funny time when she's pregnant.
PS: Make the scene when Selina is telling about her pregnancy a memorable moment for Bruce and Selina, maybe by making Selina give Bruce a treasure hunt or something that's memorable.

Just don't forget to continue ;)