Really great just a few things that bugs me. Dex' first name is spelled Ronon not Ronan and who is Chip? You could of course use your own characters but wasn't there one guy named Chuck manning the DHD?

So cute!

Ronan can be blunt, but he's not usually stupid... Anyway, very sweet between Carter and O'Neill.

This was interesting and sweet. I love the origami rose.
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so cute!

Great short story. i notice an error, you got at the beginning that the IDC is from earth, and at the end you got the mid way station. So Daniel, Jack and Teal'c would of come from the mid way sation and not from earth. Keep up the good work