Aww

Aww

Wow you really captured both characters and the wording was perfect the only thing wrong with it was the fact that there is only 1 chapter there should be At least 5. 10/10

Nice lil story lol

Awww is all I can say because it's all I can say. Nice oneshot

Cool! I like it :)

..Great job! Very well written.

HAHAH I LOVE IT! It's... It's.. I. Cnt quite word it out but I did like it. Lot how Zuko reacted nd especially Katara. Love d the end that when they ever crossed eyes they turned red! That seriously made me think of whTs going to happen next in the next chapter. I dnt quite feel worthy of giving aside becaus ei dnt write but maybe help or request or just more of suggestions that you do ot have to listen maybe give a bit of background to before whT happened nd then go to the after Zuko joined th gaang! Have funny sweet romantic moments just like those that wrote! I loved it! LOVED ITT CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER! Thank you! 3 :D!

AWW! I love it! It's so cute and sweet! Added to faves!

That was a lovely oneshot. One question though - when does it take place?

Good job. I found no spelling, grammer, of punctuaion errors. I liked the short sweetness to it. Reading this was like tasting a spoonful of sugar. Small but with a lingering flavor that makes you want another. Can't wait for your next one. Keep writing.

it is a good story and i dont think it could have been any better

I enjoyed your story, but I would like to see more show & less tell. Instead of saying her voice is threatening, describe it. Is her voice harsh, low, high deep. Describe what is happening and let us guess the feeling. Such as saying she is scared. Describe it, just saying that her eyes go wide and that she inhales sharply shows us that she is scared without you outright saying it. This is just advice & you are free to write how you will. Look forward to more of your work!

i love this story, keep on writing.

I SHIP ZUTARA!

This was an amazing read. The details in which Katara and Zuko find themselves in and this passion within each other for each other. They find themselves in each other and can no longer deny what they want.