| Reviews for Total Eclipse of the Heart |
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bunnykim89 chapter 11 . 6/21 I hope u continue this story because it is fascinating. I became hooked after the first chapter and bing read it. I love the concept and hope you update soon. |
ASDFGHJKL123abc chapter 11 . 5/24/2019 Loving this fix! Can’t wait for the next update |
optimistic alex chapter 11 . 5/5/2019 I am loving this story! The angst and heartache are making this a very hard story to stop reading. Please keep writing this awesome story! |
jupiter2005 chapter 11 . 3/29/2019 Raye gets what she deserves for destroying whatever may have happened between Darien and Serena. I hope that Darien gets his divorce and makes things better for his son. Also hope that he can get another chance with Serena. Keep up the good work. |
Guest chapter 11 . 3/9/2019 Why dose rei care she is having an affair |
TropicalRemix chapter 11 . 3/9/2019 i'm glad that he is finally divorcing raye. maybe he can fix things with serena. |
SaturnnFoxx chapter 10 . 3/5/2019 OMG! I just found this and it’s so juicy. Love what you have and can’t wait for the next update! |
Bky chapter 10 . 2/9/2019 This is the first time I read this fan fic, im so glad I found it! I read all avalable chapters in one day, its 4 am as I write this. I have neber hated Ray's character in any ohter story as much as I hate her in this... but then I feel sorry if it isball caused by mental imbalance... I think she probably knew Bennet was the name she used cause she seems to have kept a letter. I am anxiously awaiting next chapter, I hope everything is well with you. |
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 10 . 1/23/2019 all are stupid! People are dumn |
Taino Delsan13 chapter 10 . 1/20/2019 All I don't think I ever hate it so much a Raye right now. I really hope that b gets whats coming to her |
Guest chapter 10 . 1/19/2019 I hate reading about rei |
Guest chapter 10 . 1/19/2019 Fucken ray ive always hated her. Wht is she so malicious to serena. I bet she was feeding all those lies. I hope she gets ger karma. Poor serena. |
lisasailor chapter 10 . 1/19/2019 Oh, what a b*tch Raye is! Hoping Darien can see what she did to Serena and to him, divorce her sorry, lying, cheating ss, take DJ and move on with his life. Serena deserves a chance at happiness if she can overcome the ultimate betrayal of the girl who was once her friend and look past the lies she was told too to the truth Darien is telling her. Looking forward to the rest of the story as you have time to post it :) |
CrownPandora chapter 10 . 1/19/2019 the suspense! thanks for the update, so good |
TropicalRemix chapter 10 . 1/19/2019 Rei knew serena's contact info. She just wanted darien to herself. She got him and she still cheating on him. Darien should just divorce her. maybe him and serena can work things out and he can marry her. |