Hi! I just finished! But I’m still waiting for those 10 daysso sadly. But it left me a good mood they deserved the best!

The first time I read this it was only up to chapter 12 and was a piece that lingered with me. After re reading this (after a lot of searching to find the piece again) my delight was immense to find that they were reunited and that Roy patiently waited for her to heal at her own pace. This is an excellent story. It drove me mad at times in wanting them to reunite but all of that madness made those last few paragraphs of pure joy so so worth it because they worked so hard to get there. Thank you for writing this, it has been a treat to return to. I will return once more should the final part ever be released but if not that last segment is more than enough. Thank you again.

Awwww, I knew this wasn't completed but I still kept reading because it was so well done. Great story!

I've been following this story for years now. It's really great, I always find myself coming back.

Man. wow. first off fuck marcus yo. good job making me hate him LOL. So. long review that's late night rambling. you're creative in the scenes you've devised throughout this story. and I sincerely appreciated how you revealed parts of Riza's character in her interactions with other especially in her precarious state, back to being 18 again. Her relationship with John, though short-lived and occuring in her amnesiac state spoke volumes on her character and through the OCS like Jill or the people who protected her while she was with John or Team MustangBecca and none other than Roy Mustang himself, I can clearly see how Kindness and Protection runs a strong motif in this story and honestly, I feel better about humanity (excluding the ppl who beat her up smh). And I was so happy to see Rebecca showing up! At the start, Roy and Riza's interactions were clipped as professionals go and it was a journey to see them finally get to the endgame, after all the worry and heartache, that by chapter 29 you could see how there's no time left to be wasted between them. The fluff at the end of your last update was so. man. boy. she remembers everything and i am so happy you made it so believeable and subtle for Roy to pick up on and gah. it's 5am and i haven't slept but i needed to type this out to express how I appreciate the dedication that went into this fic and if you ever complete the final part, i'll be sure to read it.

This is fantastic! I just read the whole story from the beginning for the first time. You really captured the characters with a great storyline. I was on the edge of my seat for the majority of the time.

Great story

This is one of the stories I always come back to and I do hope you complete it soon! Your writing is fantastic and SO original! Keep being awesome!

OH MY GOD! THIS IS AMAZING! i loved it! i love all your other stories as well! i spent an entire Saturday reading them! its so damn good! and this one was the best! i loved it so much i could not put my phone down! i actually hid my phone in my pencilcase and kept reading this story when the teachers wernt looking! XD (I really hope you find time to write an epilogue as well) IT REALLY IS AN AMAZING STORY! LOVED IT!

Just in case you still check these, I want you to know I've been staying with this story since 2013 and will continue to till the end comes.

Ok,so hear me out...THIS STORY,THIS INCREDIBLE STORY...OH GOD...I WANT THE WHOLE WORLD TO KNOW ABOUT THIS...THE INTENSITY...THE EMOTIONS...THE DEVELOPMENT OF THE CHARACTERS...AND THE HELL THAT THE CHARACTERS AND WE,THE READERS, HAVE BEEN THROUGH..."ugly sobbing " THIS FIC JUST KILLED MEEEE! I'M TELLING YOU...ROYAI IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THING FROM THIS PLANET AND YOU REPRESENTED THEIR RELATIONSHIP SO PERFECT...IM CRYING..I DONT HAVE WORDS...YOUR WRITING STYLE IS INCREDIBLE ...and if you see this...1 year passed! not 10 days but 1 year man...and I'm dying to know the end...I mean,I'm freaking satisfied with this ending...but the story MUST be completed ! love ya 3

Oh God...can't they be happy for a longer time,for God's sake...

The ending tho...spectacular! 3

"screaming into the void"...AAAAHHHHH

Omg...that walk through the garden...I'm so happy that she is more comfortable around them...especially around him..."ugly sobbing"